I think- the idea had potential, I enjoyed the buildup, but in the end, all the build-up led to... not much. One adventure, as an afterthought, in parentheses, is disappointing! I'd read an expanded version happily, tho.

nice story. i like it. it was very interesting.

This is awesome O.o

I love it ! Omg you've some gret ideas :)

I would've loved if you turned this story I to a series :D that would be like the most epic thing every but the story like this is awesomely enough ! I loved it ! Especially the Cougar/Jensen moments :)

I flipping LOVE this! You can totally make so many side one shots about this! Like go into detail about certain parts like the five of them growing up and learning to get along with eachother and what not and maybe even after the movie! The possibilities are endless! My mind is litterally spinning from all the ideas

Great story, incredibly detailed and engaging. Thanks for the imagination fodder!

Great fic!