| Reviews for The Tiny Golden One |
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Elizabeth Melende chapter 5 . 12/6/2019 Thank you it was great I love it If you have time is so much to continue . |
dead feather chapter 5 . 3/24/2019 This is fluffy. But Chi sure gets hurt a lot. |
dead feather chapter 4 . 3/24/2019 Didnt seem playsible that Chi would be allowed to walk around Tokyo alone without any gusrds. Akihito also seems overprotective mother so I cant quite see him caring that little, especially when he ran away years ago when he knew how much in danger Asamis child would be. |
Guest chapter 5 . 1/17/2018 One more chapter pleseee |
llazo4108824 chapter 5 . 11/7/2017 This is a very cool fanfic and I like it a lot and could you make more chapters soon please I like to see what happens next to Asami and Akihito more. |
Liapxi chapter 5 . 10/19/2017 mommy akihito... love it love it please update soon. |
sasa nehorimichi chapter 5 . 8/14/2017 Plz write more |
Shiranai Atsune chapter 1 . 6/28/2017 Whoa. Akihito disappeared off the face of the earth, nowhere to be found for years, for whatever reason? Wonder where he is and why he left? ...OMG! AKIHITO AND ASAMI HAVE A CHILD TOGETHER! Their daughter knows how to handle a gun? |
PaleLaurelsBleed chapter 5 . 3/17/2017 I was shocked at Aki's punishment (it was dangerous and irresponsible) but I was really happy with the reunion- not just Aki and his daughter's but also with his friends. Can't wait for update |
CrazyFanYaya chapter 1 . 12/10/2016 This is my first time reading this ff..it's really good but i must say...it is wise to let a five year old walking alone? Moreover she is a mobster's daughter..she even been kidnapped when she's three...I think you accidentally portrayed akihito as irresponsible mom |
Guest chapter 5 . 11/10/2016 I am so conflicted about this. It was good but you should have done more with asami finding aki cause I mean he was gone for 5 years and then asami shows up and there's no discussion he just packs up and ready to go. They should have talked more about why he left and why he didn't come back and maybe think about if he wants to go back. Their daughter has lived there her whole life and doesn't really know asami not to mention asami is a freaking mobster. Wouldn't at first aki think we can't go back with asami cause she won't be safe and she has asami's name. Im just saying I liked the story but I would have liked it so much more if there was more drama. I mean you could blow this story out of the water, if you just add some flare in there. Go crazy with it. This story has potential also regarding asami even though he may seem rough, kids have a way of making your heart open and you just can't help it. Especially when it's your own kid. I think asami would suprize everyone and turn out to be very fatherly. |
Guest chapter 5 . 10/15/2016 This is amazing. So grateful you posted it |
Tiwi Tama chapter 5 . 10/10/2016 Is there any sequel |
yukino76 chapter 5 . 4/30/2016 yes Aki-chan tell us |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/5/2016 Thank u for ur update |