This was great! very well written, and you also managed to capture the essence of these two characters very well. It's a shame it's so short though

We're talking sexual assault here

That was rather enjoyable 3 I would really love to read more!

This is a great short! I love Kizami and Yuka stuff. And damn, was he creepy! I love your writing style btw, it's all great!

WHAT THE ELL!?

I'm going in fandom-blind here, so I can't comment as to the in-characterness of anyone...

You're definitely good at creating an air of horror. You have good imagery - I can clearly picture the scene. (And it's creepy!)

Even though this is a horror story, the main premise of the fic struck me as pretty funny. (The girl has to pee but doesn't want to go in a corpse-filled bathroom.)

Kizami seems like a real creepy pervert.

Love this so much! Absolutely one of my favorite corpse party pairings, and for something that squicks you, you wrote this topic very awesomely so kudos to you! Great job! :D

I'm interested in this. It's really good. I like it! Great writer!

Kizami...
You sir has some little sister problems.
are practically rapeing her.
Poor Yuka having to go with the humiliation.
Well at least Yuka gotta pee.
Why couldn't they do it in the bucket ?
I love the thinking ;)
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