Wow wow wow loved it

Twas a fun read.

~Elsil

Some of the whole 'we're keeping you here until you marry' feels really forced... But the main cast characterizations are just so dang good that I will definitely finish reading this story.

~Elsil

I just wanted to let you this review saying, I could actually see this as an episode. I could really see it as if it were on my TV. I'm not New to the Jack/Sam ship but am New to reading SG-1 fics and I have to say this was awesome! Thanks for writing this!

This was one of the most complex story on the relational sense that I've ever read. What I found the most impressive is the evolution of the characters... It went smoothly without any kind of forced feelings and that's very commendable.

All in all, this story was amazing and I'm left wanting for more. You did an excellent work, it was brilliant really.

I am happy enough with the ending. It was a great story with some awkward moments ;) I love it how they're working together and it is also nice to read a fiction which takes place in the first season (I guess so?) and learn more about Sam's relationship to him bevor the Zatarc Test makes their love obvious.

This has been an exceedingly enjoyable read. The rituals you put together for the Rorilian marriage rites were very well-thought and effective, and made for a very satisfying buildup between Jack and Sam. I have no small love for this tale - definitely going to be reading it again in the future!

Great story - stayed up way to late and read the whole thing in one go!

I'm really enjoying this story, sorry I haven't reviewed it in earlier chapters, was too busy following the story
TThanks for sharing
Keep writing
Kikki

Very awesome! This was a story that really showed a lot and it was a very good read

Great ending!

I like the conclusion and think you've written a good story. I enjoyed reading it very much, and would like to thank you for your effort.

Lovely! Funny and very in-character!

this is by FAR my favourite stargate sg1 piece ever written. the characters were portrayed so well you did excellent! well done, so enjoyable i recommend this to anyone who loves stargate.

I'm in the middle of reading this...it's incredible!