| Reviews for Fire and Rain |
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  someone chapter 13 . 6/29/2017 your romance and story are nice but CHERIK FOR DA WIN! :D |
 Worth1 chapter 11 . 6/28/2017 chhheeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiiikkkkkkkkk! |
| Worth1 chapter 6 . 6/28/2017 grrrrr when charles was young raven always told him to keep outta her head and im really pissed at that since raven was always like no more hiding but never realised charles was suppressing, or hiding his mutation. diiiiiiieeeeee raven then now they all grow up and they are suddenly tolerant of jamie reading their mind and shit? they dont tell her to keep out? |
| Arla Logan chapter 13 . 9/20/2015 I really liked this story. Your character portrayal and development were good, and I liked Jamie. My one problem is the relationship between Charles and Jamie. Not as much the age difference, as that wouldn't matter much at 30 and 36, but the fact that she is underage. He should at least wait till she's eighteen. Also, it might be a good idea for Jamie to have some time to get used to her new life without a relationship in the mix. Just my thoughts, I still loved the rest, especially how close she got with Angel at the beginning:) |
| Kureiji-Kurai chapter 1 . 2/26/2015 Oh,I love that! Good job Charles! The end to the chapter was perfect! Just something Charles would do, and he is right! I'm already curious about that girl! I like the shift so far, I find it very interesting. I like it too because this means Darwin won't die to Shaw! I was always very freaking mad about that! Erik gave Shaw what he deserved even if Charles did not deserve to be part of it, in his head, feeling him die. But I'm babbling. What I mean in general is that this is very interesting |
| bookworm51485 chapter 2 . 10/13/2014 ...and the glaringly obvious Mary Sue sends me running in the opposite direction. |
| HopelessDragon chapter 12 . 10/10/2014 Loved the story whole-heartedly, I'm on to read the sequel! |
| sheslexioh3 chapter 12 . 9/10/2014 Read this whole fic in just a few hours! Its amazing :) cant wait to read the sequel :) beautifully done! |
| ElleBelleGirl chapter 12 . 8/7/2014 A sequel is a must! And please can we have a little thing with erik and your OC? I think it will greatly help build up the angst between charles and erik in DOFP! So please consider it, I really want a sequel following that line. It will be just so interesting to read! Cant wait! :D |
| FutureOlympian chapter 12 . 8/7/2014 Loved it |
| harrypotterfrek chapter 12 . 8/6/2014 SEQUEL |
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/6/2014 This was an amazing story. I enjoyed every single word and your effort. I really do hope you create a sequel. It would be very interesting to see Quicksilver and everything and how you will alter the story and stuff! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/6/2014 Great story, and yes please for a sequel. :) |
| A Frozen Shadow chapter 12 . 8/6/2014 Loved it ;p |
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/6/2014 Omgomgomg u hv to do a sequel! |
