| Reviews for Asylum |
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inkuseitor chapter 2 . 7/29/2014 A nice update, thank you! How much darker will the following chapters be? It's not a coincidence that they start with Gokudera's first days after the escape, right? I have a bad feeling about it. A very bad one actually. Still can't help but wonder how long will it take for the kids to meet each other. Or will they already be teenagers or maybe even young adults when they do? |
Ace Clover chapter 2 . 7/23/2014 wow it's really dark, and you said it will only get darker after this. i love it! Mukuro was tortured and his thumb are missing. i wonder who Kawahira really is. in the manga and anime, the author never really explained it, even though he has mist flames... back to the story. it seems Haru has a certain fear towards gore, but i don't know why she avoids the flower. hmm.. Byakuran seems to be interested at Haru. maybe because of her fearlessness or maybe because of what she said to him. maybe in the future Haru will work for him/with him? |
AvidReader chapter 1 . 7/17/2014 I like your story...I'm interested to see how this story will go! |
inkuseitor chapter 1 . 7/16/2014 Finally you published it! TBH it doesn't look as I expected it to, but I still enjoyed it. I liked the way you portayed the relationship between Gokudera's parents and especially between Gokudera and Bianchi. Just wondering what Dino's line has to do with the story, since the only other character who wasn't close to Gokudera or Haru is Kawahira, but he sort of sheltered Haru when she has been running away from home in canon. |
sincerlyneveryours chapter 1 . 7/14/2014 I'm really excited for this. I like your Haru. Even at a young age, she has this level of complexity and ability to see beyind the surface. Well at least it seems like it to me. I've been waiting for you to write a multi chapter story. best of luck with the writing. |
raving rabbids chapter 1 . 7/8/2014 i can't wait to see how this story unfolds! I really love the small backstory for each of the characters. I always get really excited whenever I see a fic by your 'cause you write best gokuharu fics *ever* looking forward to the next chapter! (regardless I'll still be hoping for some 5986 smut lol) |
Ace Clover chapter 1 . 7/3/2014 wow this story looks promising :) nice background story, no visible grammar or spelling mistake (if any), and it's a gokuharu story :D |
Kaileena Sawada chapter 1 . 7/2/2014 It's an interesting story, I want to read more. Is Vongoal famiglia 10th will be there also awith Reborn in adult form ? |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2014 This is very interesting so far. I enjoyed reading this first chapter and I am intrigued about how the rest of the story will play out. I love reading stories about accurate Mafia lives and some authors don't do a good job portraying it. Their views are different than what I view them as, but so far, your display of the Mafia life is similar to how I think it is, so I really enjoyed reading this. I am looking forward to more. I hope you will be able to update soon. Keep up the great work! :) |