| Reviews for Bruises |
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ercilia chapter 1 . 6/16 Cómo se llama el libro? Y el autor? Tiene edición en español? Gracias |
MontmarayRoyal chapter 1 . 6/14 Well, I enjoyed reading this first chapter, but I have no way to get the complete book, so I suppose I shall never find out what happens. |
MAC Nicholls chapter 1 . 5/6 I really dislike incomplete stories on fanfiction, which are marked as complete! |
Callialex chapter 1 . 5/1 A promising beginning, it's a shame it wasn’t completed. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13 dang, she remembers the awful proposal but not the letter? poor darcy |
Stephyyyy01 chapter 1 . 12/25/2019 Oh, so well writing |
mangosmum chapter 1 . 1/21/2019 The first chapter didn't seem familiar to me so I went to Amazon to buy it but realized that I already have it. It's been quite a while since I first read it. I did enjoy it very much! |
mosuzmartian chapter 1 . 8/14/2017 I read this book an Amazon and now I've come across you on here and had to tell you how much I loved it. The angst, pain and confusion you captured in this story was so well done. I've re-read it several times. One of my all-time favorites. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2017 Please please update! |
Windchimed chapter 1 . 8/22/2016 With this one, I have now come to the end of your P&P offerings, both free and published. I must say they were all wonderful, and I deeply appreciate your sharing them. This book is actually the first P&P fanwork I have ever purchased, but after seeing how good your other stories were, I decided to take a chance. I'm glad I did. While "Side by Side, Apart" wasn't my very favorite of yours ("An Odd Notion of Kindness" takes that spot for me, personally), it was definitely a well-written story filled with character growth and interesting twists, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I do have a question, if you still read these reviews and answer them: Throughout your stories, your spelling and grammar have been excellent, with very few typos. However, I noticed that you use "lead" rather than "led" as the past tense of "to lead." As far as I know, that's not the modern usage for either American English or British English, but you've used it consistently enough that I suspect there's a valid reason for it. Is it a Regency variation? If so, is there a site anywhere that lists variations like that? I've been giving some thought to writing a P&P fanfiction, and a resource like that would be very helpful. If you get a chance to let me know, I'd appreciate it; otherwise, that's quite all right - I won't be offended. :-) Thank you again for your wonderful stories! |
klarissa14 chapter 1 . 6/19/2016 Please continue! |
nerdysham chapter 1 . 4/26/2016 Oh my gosh! I love your writing so far. Please from the bottom of my heart keep writing! Ahhhh! So many feels attacking me right now! xoxo, nerdy sham |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/24/2016 this is so so good, poor mr darcy. update soon ple |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/23/2016 This was awesome. I read it thousand times and never grew tired of it. You really caught the very essence of the characters and made them real. Their personalities seem so true for me. I thank you for sharing with us and I'm happy that you found a more successful way to show it to kindle readers. I'll be happy to buy it. Congratulations, I'm happy for you. |
Dizzy Lizzy.60 chapter 1 . 4/23/2016 Powerful chapter. Ill have to catch the published version. I'm in no ways an angst lover, but I may just have to give this drama a try. I don't know who to feel more sorry for, D or E. Brava. Cheers. |