| Reviews for We Are Lucky |
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ae chapter 1 . 7/12/2014 First of all, I'd like to apologize for being a little piece of shit and disappearing for two weeks... almost two weeks. Two weeks minus a- whatever. Getting sidetracked. So I heard you already have your next prompt, so I don't have to worry about that? Lol, I'm so bad at this judging thing? M'kay first of all. I really liked the concept of this story. In it, we see something that is rarely ever mentioned; Big Three sibling fluff. (I mean come on imagine Zeus being this overprotective strict older brother and like Poseidon and Hades roughhousing and playing pranks while Zeus tries to keep up this 'no fun' facade but like lol no. Okay I'm done.) And it's very nice of you to note that we can't exactly take relationships for granted. I thought it was a great message. I also really liked the whole Hades thing: how he's not, um, how he's not inhumane and more lonely in general. He still has some humanity, also portrayed in the books. Me likey. The s&g: I spotted maybe one or two minor mistakes, but it was overall better. Okay, your overall total is: Uh... give me a second. Spelling and Grammar: 9/10points Plot: 5/5points Flow: 5/5points Usage of prompt for that round: 10/10 (how well it was used) Length: **500words-1000words {10points}** 1001words-1500words {15/15points} ** 1501words-2000words {20points} ** any thing over 5000 is 40 points Bonus Points Made me laugh (full out laughter guys not a slight smile): 0/5 points Made me cry (like actual tears :p and I don't cry easily): 0/10 points Did not switch paring/place/emotion/scenario/ or ask for a prompt: 5/5 points Over 10 000 words: 0/50 Points ... uh 359 is 42? Yeah, please excuse my amazing math skill. So 42 points total. You did a great job, and I'm hoping to be pretty on it with the next fic. Cause honestly. |
guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2014 This is... just conversation. It's hardly a story. |
Fairy Tail Fanatic 4EVER chapter 1 . 6/28/2014 You should make this a two shot and have the second one as the big three bonding, it would be so cute! I really love those stories... |