Reviews for The Hound, Hero of Ferelden
Guest chapter 3 . 9/6/2018
Wouldn't have minded reading this.
workforfood chapter 3 . 9/5/2018
Shit. This was what needed.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/6/2018
Love it hope it's not abandoned
Advena Phillips chapter 2 . 9/11/2017
[6/10 - So far] Okay, first, I have to say that this needs more chapters. This story has the potential to become something absolutely fucking hilarious. You've got a somewhat delirious Hound who is now a Grey fucking Warden. There is no way of making this suck. The only thing that you need to work on is your writing, which, while better than 75% of fanfiction out there, leaves some to be desired.
jon12231223 chapter 2 . 5/31/2017
more please
el mano chapter 2 . 10/7/2016
This is a fantastic story. I'm half sure that you won't continue but I am lovin the premise and I enjoyed your two chapters. I hope to read more.
PrincessArien chapter 2 . 4/29/2016
Hehe, this should be fun :P It'll be interesting to see just how Thedas will cope with someone like the Hound, especially since Game of Thrones is far more of a crapsack world than Thedas is...both are pretty shitty places, but Dragon Age is definitely a much brighter and more hopeful series. Anyways, I look forward to whenever your next update will be, if it's anything like these first two chapters (well-written and highly amusing with their whole sort of cheeky, snarky way) then it will be a great read. Keep up the good work :D
lagoon childe chapter 2 . 2/1/2016
Please, for the love of god tell me this isn't abandoned.
DasCheesenborgir chapter 2 . 10/9/2015
Well, made me chuckle a bit for sure but... I guess I came hoping for something different :/

The tone of the narration's definitely something that hooked me in, but aside from that it feels like it's just... plain lacking a lotta substance. It feels more like a collection of short snippets happening in chronological order, I wouldve really liked it if things just slowed down a little bit and there was some prolonged dialogue or a more lengthy train of thought rather than just some narration to shoo it all away-

-I suppose there's a good chance I'm tragically missing the point of what you're doing here, but at the same time I can't help but feel you're throwing away a ton of potential just making it a sort of zippily paced silly thing. I'd think with something like this there's a wondrous amount of room for satire and poking fun at certain things with the particularly dry and cynical point of view you're adopting, and if you took a bit of time to zoom in- really, I think if you just cut down on the time lapses and tried stringing together little 'moments' like what you have now into meatier, continuous segments, you could have something... more suited to my personal taste :p
IamOminous chapter 2 . 9/8/2015
CHICKEN!
big allen chapter 2 . 6/18/2015
Wow never thought of how alike the king is with joffrey.
Hypothetical Spiritual Entity chapter 2 . 5/3/2015
This looks interesting. The Hound should feel right at home in the crapsack world of Thedas. Except, y'know, the Warden is like a hero out of classical fantasy, and will probably make dear old Sandor question how the hell they're still alive several times before the Blight is over. And the whole "magic everywhere" thing will probably be weird to him. Assuming he stays sober enough to notice. I look forward to more.
Anonymous chapter 2 . 4/20/2015
Too good! Keep going and make this irredeemably hilarious.
Vinyl Scratch3 chapter 2 . 4/12/2015
My god I want more of this. I want more of Sandor taking none of the bullshit and being badass enough to not need to. I want him to tell people to fuck off in various colourful ways. I want him to eat every chicken when cunt mouths won't shut! Dammit why couldn't this story have continued!?
Lord-of-Change chapter 2 . 3/27/2015
Normally, I don't enjoy to read stories like these, that lacks real descriptions of events and in-depth character interactions and development. But you know what? I love this one. Why? Because if I didn't know any better, I could have sworn that this chapter was written by Sandor himself.

I don't know if you've done it on purpose, but the way you narrate the story is just how I imagine that Sandor would do it if he ever decided to write down his adventures. I just love it, and I hope to see an update on this story in the future.
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