| Reviews for Shaping the Future |
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Grubby92 chapter 97 . 7/23 Two days ago, I started reading this story on a whim, that has proven to be one of the best decisions that I have made in a long time. I cannot express the sheer amount of emotions I felt when Harry turned up in the middle of a Death Eater meeting and completly and utterly bullshited his way out. He not only protected his mind against The Dark Lord, but he managed to spin a story that included the two most trusted members being trators and made out that he was the best, most devoted servant that he could ever have. AND THEY BELIVED HIM! Respect. What I am trying to say is, you wrote a brilliant story that deserves all of the credet that it can get. Thank you for sharing this story. |
BlackPearl888 chapter 94 . 7/7 Hi, ich musste direkt nachdem ich dieses Kapitel gelesen habe meine Schwester holen und mit ihr eine heiße Schokolade machen. Unser neues Lieblingsrezept: Kakaopulver in heißer Milch anrühren dann eine Mischung aus braunem Kandis, Zimtblüte, Cassia Zimt, Orangenschale, Kardamom, Piment, Macis und Nelken mörsern und dazu geben, Minimarshmallows und Schlagsahne mit Vanillezucker und oben drauf noch etwas Ceylon Zimt. Luna Lovegood ist mein Lieblingscharakter, ich hab bisher von nahezu jedem HP-Charakter eine Version gelesen die ich nicht mochte, doch Luna ist immer die gleiche vom Wesen her, man muss sie einfach gern haben. Ich finde deine Geschichte total gut geschrieben, sie hat für mich genau den richtigen Spannungsgrad, was bei mir teilweise echt schwer zu treffen ist. Auch die Entwicklung der Charaktere ist nachvollziehbar und schön geschrieben. Vor allem dass du die Geschichte so gut auf Englisch schreibst, dass ich erst bei der deutschen Reviewantwort entdeckt habe, dass du auch aus Deutschland stammst. Ich schreibe momentan selber an Fanfictions, würde gerne in Englisch schreiben, mach es bisher aber nur auf Deutsch, obwohl ich inzwischen fast nur noch auf Englisch lese. Ich habe bisher nur einen Account auf Wattpad. Naja, ich lese jetzt Mal die Geschichte zuende. |
Guest chapter 30 . 6/21 why did dumbledore wants severus to tell voldie the prophecy |
Lazir chapter 35 . 6/4 Ok... I was liking this fic but the unnecessary Sirius bashing is too much. I don't know why you dislike him so. He's not perfect but he was a Black and and an auror and a soldier. And he loved harry. Those are canon facts. I don't recognize your version of sirius; it's too ooc. You think he never killed? Please. |
Lazir chapter 33 . 6/4 I love bad-ass Weasley twis :) |
Lazir chapter 25 . 6/4 I adore the scene where the entire Order is mobilized into a fighting force to help take the DE's down at once! Very cool and very different. |
Lazir chapter 23 . 6/4 Harry is very proprietary of Severus after a few days of being with him. I can't imagine he felt this way about daphne and would choose to let her go or be with anyone else. I think I'll just stop thinking about that plot point, sorry, every chapter seems to have something conflicting to it. But Severus deserves someone fighting for him, good on Harry |
Lazir chapter 22 . 6/4 Lol. Younger Harry in the books would. NOT be as ok with this, lol. |
Lazir chapter 21 . 6/4 As always I love your interactions between the golden trio. They are such good friends. |
Lazir chapter 21 . 6/4 If it's not cheating to go back to daphne, then it is cheating to be with Severus now. Im glad they sort of acknowledge it though. Harry for now seems loyal to severus, assuming nothing happens to him I guess. |
Lazir chapter 19 . 6/4 I really don't understand his stance about Daphne. He can't have lost her more than a few years ago and he literally can have a relationship with her again. He has with everyone else. How is she going to feel if she gets together with younger Harry and finds out his counterpart got over her and replaced her so easily? Its very odd? We all know severus is crazy loyal, but harry even in the books does seem to move on fast. Then again he named his children after people he loved, so maybe not. Lol all useless speculation. I understand it's authors prerogative to gloss over. |
Lazir chapter 15 . 6/4 Was he already with severus in the future? Was that his "lover"? If so, why not go after him rather than Daphne. Or does he not have conflicting feelings or guilt about the two? Im a bit confused, but I do like this relationship with snape. I'm surprised and excited you got rid of dumbleore this early. |
Lazie chapter 14 . 6/4 Wait a sec... He MARRIED Daphne? And he doesn't care to be with her again? That seems a bit much. I mean, if he was with severus in the future, I can imagine he'd want to be with him now. Was he not as close or understood by Daphne? War changes us but she was his wife. And is he seriously a widow at 21? He can't have lost her too long ago. He lived a lot in a few short years it seems. Or he just got married super quickly and lost it just as quickly. |
Lazir chapter 13 . 6/4 It's that easy to remove a Horcrux! Well that's part of my theory ruined. I love that Harry took Sirius' name, but he also hasn't shown him any respect or trust, you know? Sirius is a brilliant and powerful wizard and everyone says it. Yes he's damaged from azkaban and reckless, but harry is trusting even his stupid and reckless younger self more than his Godfather. The only parent hes ever known. |
Lazir chapter 11 . 6/4 I LOVED harry and Ron and hermione in this. Hermione comforting older harry, and Ron and harrys silent conversation was AMAZING. |