You have a really interesting habit of not planning for most of the stuff you end up writing. It’s really funny!

This was awesome!

This story was beautiful and actually made me cry in sadness. Thank you very much for writing this wonderful story.

ah I'm sad to see this story end I really enjoyed it and I have to thank you for writing it:)

Thanks for the great story. Glad Harry and Sirius get a happy ending.

Drop the : when a conversation is gonna take place. It is horrible and has no place here.

Look for different ways to say a character is going to talk instead of the amateurish says, asks, shouts, etc. Many ways to describe a character about to have a conversation.

Separate conversations from the main body of a paragraph otherwise your entire story looks like a horrible unreadable mess, wall of text.

Aside from what should be obvious and basic mistakes I didn't bother to read anything about the story and most likely won't considering your other six or so stories posted at the same time are about gay Harry Potters so the chances of this one being one are very high and I don't bother with those stories.

Oh I hope you make a sequel! It would be so cool to see what happens in some of the worlds that the ENTIRE magical community calls home. For example, will people want to test their metal in the Tournaments at the Coliseum? How will finally rebuilding Radiant Garden with the use of magic look? Another is, what about Davy Jones and the rest of the POTC franchise? Will the new bearers and Light Weapon wielders be able to help? Also, what about Xehanort? Will he make a reappearance as he did in Dream Drop Distance? These are the things I hope that you can answer. Other than that, the end was VERY good. I liked how you split up most of the countries into the multitude of worlds in the KH Universe. Also, back to the world of Port Royal. What will some of the magicals do now that they know that there's a world full of pirates and other ruffians? Will some turn pirate themselves, or will they try and find some semblance of peace? Just something to think about.
Captain Jas. Hook

I need a tissue that was sad I can't believe that one of Harry's mates has died, great chapter and I hope that the ending of this story is a happy one:)

Oh that is heartbreaking. I didn't want Harry to lose one of his mates.

oh the Death Eaters are proving how stupid they are with this plan of attack, I loved the chapter and I can't wait to see Voldemort get what's coming to him:) it would be funny if the GRAVIGA snapped the wands with its force:)

This was great. And I agree about Sirius being my absolute favorite too, but just make sure he doesn't get hurt on his birthday. That would totally suck.

Oh somebody needs to feed Fudge to Aragog!

that was unexpected I really despise Fudge, good chapter and I can't wait for more:)

that was a great chapter and I can't wait for whatever happens next:)

This was great! I loved it and I can't wait to read more, especially my Sirius freed.