Good story! Poor Jack having such a hard life, mortal and immortal!

That was amazing to read!

Excellent story! I really liked seeing Jack's memories and him growing up.

I am completely confused as to why Sera would trust any of the Guardians (minus Jack)! Especially with Jack! they just proved that they couldn't be trusted, it takes time to build. And Jack gave them a piece of trust, and then they just trampled all over it. And Sera is angry for 2 minutes and then let's it go without so much as a by your leave?
Unrelated, I love the seasonal siblings.

Six, huh? Nature, Moon, Time, Death.. Sun maybe? Sky?

Excellent story and a definite new fav!

I would love to read the sequel if you write one. please notify me if you do. thank you and have a nice day.

That was a very very very long chapter. I really liked it though and it was also very emotional. Though I don't quiet understand Jack's weird ability to mess people up, it's kinda cool and I hope it'll be explained later.

This was soooo cool! I love how you had two story lines going, not meany can make that work but you did!
I hope you do make more of this series!

Hell no! Zeg dat je verdomme een sequel plant want anders sterf ik!
Oeps... Sorry, I accidently ranted in my native language. Says something about how upset I am and i don't believe in editing revieuws so there. Seriously thought, this was awsome, i would've revieuwed sooner but i was constantly like 'I'll do that next chap just need to know more' At jacks past i cried so hard! you meany. How could you torture our sweet fun loving Jach so much. I really want to read more. Sequal this please?

Great story. It would be fantastic to see how Jack's going to learn how to control his Gift properly. But aside that, I really liked the details in the story, the way the characters change. I was first a little bit disappointed there were no interuptions from the Guardians while they saw Jack's memories, but I realised it's much better this way as they see through his eyes and feel what he does, so why would they interupt with their opinions during it? Great work and loved it!

GAAH! I'm so so so so happy I found this story! It's absolutely amazing! I'm looking forward to the other stories you mentioned in your AN! This was probably one of the best ROTG fics I've ever read! Thank you!

Oh, I will miss this! Loved the book! So sad it's over!
I honestly think that any idea you come up with for a sequel/prequel will be totally great by me, but the one you mentioned sounds great.
Epilogues are super hard, but you nailed it. Really, really awesome job.

Awesomeness!

i have loved this story soo much!
and the idea of doing a prequel (with bunny, sera and pitch) sounds amazing!

thank you for making my day with this update and i cant wait to read more of your stories :)