Summer edit it where it says that he had been born first of all he was born about 30,000 years before her

Love it! Finally somethind new, fresh, unique...mostly NEW! I'd be happy if you contact me, read my stories...or we can just talk. If you want to of course. I really need new voices to critique my works ;)

This was great. It is. Can't wait for next chapter.
I always wanted to know what happened after the end and I was kinda disappointed that Marethyu and Sophie never got a real reunion. Only a letter. Part of me has always wanted to see Sophie bolt to the closest mirror and call back her brother.

Love it! Please continue and update it. Looks astounding