Why am I just finding this fic now?! This is Really good! The action is fast but not too fast that you can't keep up, the dialogue is perfection & the relationships are developing naturallyI love it! I thought I had run through the full Mal/River tag on here but I'm so glad I found this new (to me) gem

I really enjoyed all of these. I read all of your Firefly work on this site. I particularly enjoyed how your writing has improved over time.
I do hope you continue.

Great story, very entertaining. I really appreciated your story. Thank you.

Thank you sharing your wonderful stories as it always brings a huge smile and warms the heart...knowing there is gifted storyteller in the verse.

Well done, a very enjoyable tale!

Well ma'am I reck'in that was the best story I've seen about Firefly in the whole Verse! oh really I loved it!

Thanks for writing a new story. Very interesting

I really enjoyed this story. I would have loved to seen Mal/River play out onscreen but reading about it is just as good.

It was good. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I love stories River - Mal. This may sound strange, but it certainly River for him is more suitable than Inara

You ruttin' ... way to leave us hanging.

Thank you for the story
Looking forward to more
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Woah. I've so far read the whole of this in one day and it's amazing. Please keep updating!

I'm loving this story. Keep at it, or I'll have to start kicking puppies. :P

The direction your taking this is interesting. You've paired up map/river and Zoe/Jayne. Kaylee & Simon were a given. The crew wanted to be left out of the war is a nice twist. I look forward to future chapters.

I love this! The characters are so true to form! Cant wait to read more!