Well done !

this couple, your "atomic bomb" style, so passionate, so mind-blowing !
so sad it's your first and last time with them, but thank you anyway :)

So. Good. So good. I just can't believe how lucky I am that you decided to publish a story about those two... *love them*
You just got everything right, it's amazing.
The story's not complete... there's gonna be other chapters then?