J'ai adoré cette histoire ! Merci !
Votre Darry est sévère, autoritaire et dure ! Quand il punit, il punit!
Darry peut pourtant être si doux en le soignant par exemple.
J'aime quand pony est sur les genoux pour être puni avec la main où la ceinture ,bien qu'heureusement que ce ne soit que de la fiction !
Je pense aussi que Soda ne devrait pas avoir le rôle de punir,même
s'il le fait très bien, pour moi l'autorité c'est le père et c'est Darry,aussi dure soit-il.
Merci!

Oh this was good :)
I can't wait to read the next chapter to see what happens :)
Thank you for sharing :)

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I loved it! One of my favorite stories

I love this so much your such a great writer!

Dear Bella,
Your story is e great. The emotions come through very well. The characters seem to pull you in to the scenes. It would be even better when you clean up the spelling grammar issues. Throughout the story you use "your" as the same as you are but you should be using"you're", "he's" is the short way of writing he is but you use "his". (He's my brother and that is his truck. You're my friend and that is your pepsi.) Another one is " aloud" instead of " allowed". Aloud is noise and allowed is being permitted to do something. (He read a poem aloud to his girl. He was allowed to stay out an extra hour that night.) Finding a good beta will make your writing even better. Do take time to re
-read and correct the story as it is very well written.

I loved this story so much it inspired me to write my own story for the outsiders. Thanks for writing this it was amazing and definitely a favorite of mine now.

Your so right! Life is only as unfair as you make it! I'll hang unto this line as I'm going through a bad health struggle. Thankyou for your inspiration, efforts and courage to write this story!
Xxx :-)

A sequel would be a great idea! Please please consider this. This is one of my all time favourite fanfics. A sequel would be perfect if you were ever considering another outsiders fanfiction. Xxx:-)

phenomenal story! wont you write a sequel? pretty please?

Enjoyed the story. Don't know if the party Pony and Curly were at wouldn't be common knowledge and whether Curly would keep quiet about Pony being there. Soda sure protects Pony.

Pony sure doesn't learn. Can't imagine him disobeying his brothers again

You did a great job showing the panic Pony felt at the thought of getting a shot. When I was his age I locked myself in the car so I wouldn't get a shot but I got it anyway and had to be held down. I then became a nurse and have given many shots over the years.

Wow I was not expecting this to be the end, especially when I've only just started being able to review as me again :/. Either way I have to say this was a great way to finish the story. I especially loved the line about Pony's reflections: no mattter how many times he received the belt or was grounded, 'no matter what the brother's stuck together for it was all they had' a perfect line in my opinion.
It was nice that Soda kept his special bond wih Pony and kept quiet about the drug incident and of course Pony's mention how Darry would make Soda's punishment far worse.

I have really enjoyed reading this story the whole way through and am so thankful you managed to complete it in the end after so long, when I had been eagerly waiting since your first version. It will be a top fav I will read over and over and I will surely miss reading the updates.

I hope you have something more in the limelight for I am eager to read more of your beautiful work. Please keep up the writing and it's been an absolute pleasure moving along with this story with you! Many thanks again mate! :D xx
(Sorry for delayed review)

Aw, such a sweet chapter, and a sweet ending to this story, even though the ending came really surprising to me. Will you write another story about family? I'd love that :)