I am sad. I thought you would make this a chapter fic :( Then you had to go and put that "and with this a bond formed" I THOUGHT YOU WOULD SHOW IT! Whatever. Nice story anyways.

Oh my word! You mentioned that you had this story in the works before, but finally seeing it written out in all of it's brilliant glory is truly wonderful. I think that you handled this prompt beautifully. Your description of Sanji's state of loneliness was exceptionally well written, with the way you wrote it, it was incredibly easy to relate to his character, and fully understand why he agreed to Zoro's deal- he literally had nothing left to lose.

I chuckled at the part where Zoro was briefly caught off guard by Sanji's request of having him for a companion. Clearly Sanji was going to make Zoro work for his next soul! I also really liked their future interactions, they were rather vague, but in this case it works out beautifully because they still were able to convey to the reader how the relationship between Zoro and Sanji progressed over time, in addition learning a bit more about the characters individually Perhaps it's just me, but it kind of made me analyze their relationship on a different and deeper level.

Of course I loved this story as a whole, but I think what I liked overall was your description of Zoro's eyes, and how blatantly honest he was about his feelings for Sanji. The idea of the devil being capable of romantic feelings, especially for any mortal, is an extremely interesting concept to me, and I am incredibly happy knowing that is work came from you!

Lesson learned. I need to follow you so that I don't miss any future updates!

I love all of yours story (expecially Hard To Bear), and this one didn't make an exception! I really liked the fact that the Devil Zoro falls in love with Sanji's soul, it's soooooo romantic. Can't wait for the next one...

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it was really beautiful! but dayum! poor zoro and sanji! especially sanji! thank you for this awesome fic, i was really happy when you actually remembered! *hugs*