Awesome story. Please continue it.

Glad that she actually didn't call the police. Although, Bela's selfish behavior still gets excused and ignored after she "helps" the Winchesters, so she' still not a character I actually root for.

So, I decided that I won't be able to read this anymore. Nothing against you or anyone who enjoys this of course, but I would've liked this fic more if Bela tried to be actually a better person and deal with the consequences of her actions (without shaming Dean at every opportunity) instead of making excuses or alternative reasons for her obviously bad habits and mistakes.

Kudos for actually including Crowley though. Shame that I only read a snippet of him in this fic (as I won't continue after this), but it's still cool.

I might come back to this, but not for a long time I think. Hope you continue to write more.

So, Bela stole the Colt... I'm really not sure how this Dean is going to be able to get past that, we'll see I guess.

The one problem I have with this fic is that you use canon lines and events, but the characters feel completely different in your original plot parts. So far, I don't think the transition from hate to interest between Bela and Dean was smooth enough.

You know, the first part of this chapter represents everything I don't like about Bela. Not to mention this episode was one of the most poorly written ones (even though it was funny)...

The thing is, Sam and Dean should've been able to ID the ship and know about the Hand of Glory without Bela's help. And then there is Bela with her magical stealing skills. There's no way, no way, that she could just "bump" into Dean and switch the bottle with the hand. There's no way Dean wouldn't feel that. The fact that the episode actually did this was so stupid that it makes me mad sometimes.

When I first watched SPN, I was quite the Bela/Dean shipper. Then I noticed that Some of the writers were actively writing Dean careless (to the point that some might even call stupid) around Bela, and I just couldn't excuse that writing anymore.

It seems you're trying to show Bela's rather inconsiderate side as a sense of humor. I disagree with that entirely, but whatever.

For the record, I like Bela as a character. I just think it would've been better if you addressed some of her problematic behavior instead of making Dean look more stupid at times (by not giving him the odd pauses that seems strange to him at this point) in order to defuse the tension. For example, Dean trying to defend Bela towards the end of this chapter was shocking to me. You retconed Bela shooting Sam into being an accident, I get it, but mentioning it again doesn't feel organic; it feels like it's there just to remind people that Dean is oddly into Bela.

I guess I can read these OOC moments the effects of being shot by a Cupid.

I know I've been negative so far, but I like the premise and I see much potential for Bela/Dean pairing. I'll keep reading. I'm really curious about what you did with "Jus In Belo", because that episode was the tipping point for me in the "liking Bela" spectrum.

Your writing and work is golden. I'm the one who sent you the message asking for plot details. Please! Please! Please! Update soon or I think I'm going to die of anxiety. This is quite honestly the best fick ever written. Ever!

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Liked this, though who is the father of Bela's son?

I liked this start, can't wait for more!

I love this story, I hope the next chapter doesn't take too long!

Oh well shit is about to hit the fan people

Glad to see another chapter after so long. Bela's character deserves so much more than the writers of SPN ever gave her, so I'm glad this exists.

Awesome update :)

Is it Christmas? Long time no see!

I just binge-read through this and LOVED it! I truly hope that you'll come back for this, since there is still so much to know, especially with that creepy, messed up scene we left off!

I'm very intrigued...