Reviews for The Sparrow and the Crow
Vanitasxxion chapter 1 . 2/19/2019
came back to this once again because its amazing! hope you finish this one day.
Flow chapter 12 . 5/8/2018
Do you think you’ll ever update? I really like this story and hope you do!
Lauralkelley99 chapter 12 . 2/2/2018
I’m really enjoying this story! I hope you can update soon.
Sdb5ss chapter 12 . 8/20/2017
Yay! You finally update! And this chapter is a doozy! I'm glad to see one of my favorite pairs up and running again. I reeeeeaaalllyyy hope Xion doesn't push one of Vanitas' buttons (but knowing her she just might)! Ven and Vanitas...hm. I wonder what Xehanort could possibly use them for... *coughKHBirthBySleepcough*
Reiko x 3 chapter 12 . 8/8/2017
Worth the wait. Nice hints at upcoming plot developments, and we see how Xion is adjusting to the new status quo. Xion has good instincts, though. She had NO idea just how bad Xehanort's plans for those two really are, but that she gets the sense that SOMETHING is wrong... This is good. This is very good. I look forward to seeing what happens next! Til then!
Guest chapter 12 . 8/7/2017
OMG. I'm soooo happy you updated it! Ahhh what a sweet chapter. I love seeing this side of Vanitas, though it worries me that he's hiding something from Xion... Poor baby. She's lost on how to confront her feelings to her friends, and I get that on a personal level. I also loved the bro talk, in a way. Sure, there was tension and awkwardness mixed within, but it allowed Vanitas to express his true thoughts about his brother. He's starting to openly admit thoughts he's kept hidden, and I like that. We have Xion to thank for that. Man, now I can't help but beg to know what's coming up! Keep us updated!
Kol chapter 12 . 8/6/2017
Ohhhhh you updated! Gosh I loved every bit of this chapter, and your writing is stellar as always.
Better Known as Aaliyah chapter 11 . 7/23/2017
Oh my gossssh! I am so in love with this story! Seriously, where is the update? It's been a year!

I really love this Vanitas. He's so sarcastic and witty it's hilarious. I can see how that would get on people's nerves, but he's still really funny omg. And obviously misunderstood. And Xion is such a cute smol.

Please update soon!
Km chapter 11 . 4/12/2017
Love love love! I wish you could update this sometime soon. I swear I keep having to reread this and it kills me to know what will happen next.
BadxGood chapter 11 . 9/14/2016
I absolutely love how you have written the characters personality's and how they interact,also love how your story isn't straight up smut but can make someone get butterflies in their stomach. Damn that kiss was hot! please continue the great writing and thank you.
WOAH chapter 11 . 9/14/2016
LOVE LOVE LOVE your writing and that kiss scene was the hottest thing I have ever read. I like that it isn't smutty yet can send a spark in me. Please keep up the great work 3
Reiko x 3 chapter 11 . 8/1/2016
And Vanitas wins. Yay! Well, for now at least. There's still Xehanort to be dealt with, but for now he is happy...ish. As close to happy as he ever gets at least. Still yay. In my case it was less about the kissing and more about Xion finally admitting that she likes Vanitas and the plot progressing from there. I'm not much of a romantic to be honest. I do enjoy a well written story, though, and thus I get my fulfillment either way. This chapter was well written, therefore I am happy.
anon ovo chapter 11 . 7/20/2016
AYEEE! Okay, so, wa, poor Ven but he was understanding(as I'd expect him to be) and I'm was honest with him. Now he'll need Aqua and Terra to comfort him WAAAAAA. Anyway, the way Vanitas can feel so much for Xion (hurt, sad, etc.) Is so sweet help. He's this big ball of bitter but with Xion, hes more waaaaaaaa. Don't deny him Xion I'm happy the kissu finally came. Finally. And TWO. I love the way you write intimate stuff man, makes me feel all fuzzy hahaha. Keep it up and i look forward to the next update!nn
Zessica902 chapter 11 . 7/17/2016
yay! Finally they kissed not once but twice! now I really want to know what is going to happen next.
TremorsGirl12 chapter 11 . 7/17/2016
Yay omg. Finally!
I really loved this chapter. I loved that Vanitas confronted Xion about running away from her feelings, but that he didn't force anything on her.
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