Reviews for The Babysitter
Guest chapter 14 . 2/12
I don't know.. it feels like you missed the point of why the series is so charming. The interactions between Usui and Misaki are dull and uninteresting here; there's just no spark. He's being a super creepy dude, but without the charm that actually made it at least somewhat acceptable in canon. She is just being ridiculously rude and unlikable at every turn. It's true that they were somewhat like this in canon, but they also had positive sides, and their interactions were always left with a show of their compatibility/attraction to one another. There has been zero chemistry between them so far, and it's just not working.

I'd spend some time reading better written stories and look at how they do character interactions, and work on writing in a way that's not just one long stream of consciousness with whatever pops into your head at the time.
Guest chapter 6 . 2/12
You have some serious issues with character interactions, which is basically what this entire story is about. The flow is completely off, and half the time they don't feel anywhere near realistic at all.

I don't want to be harsh to one of the few writing in a very limited fandom like this, but this is really something you should work on.
Guest chapter 37 . 1/2
Please update
ItsBlackRose chapter 37 . 4/5/2019
I Neeeddd the next chapter nowww xoxo
Guest chapter 1 . 3/28/2019
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Adriane chapter 38 . 2/18/2019
I'll really miss it. Please tell me what happen' at the last, I need to know.
AgentJKL chapter 38 . 1/28/2019
This was an amazing story, and it’s a shame to see it never become what you imagined it to be. Although, it nice you to post ‘chapter 38’. It good to knowing when you realize the story will never finish instead of having fateful readers cling onto false hope. Nevertheless, good luck to all your future endeavours.
kittyrin chapter 38 . 1/11/2019
I'm sorry you are saying goodbye to this story, and I know how that feels. However I feel where you ended was pretty good, and I did enjoy your story. I hope we can still read your short stories and good luck to your future stories.
Crownjerk chapter 37 . 6/8/2018
Damn, i popped by just now and I realise ive been gone a while... last chapter i read before was 26 im glad it have been continued
Guest chapter 37 . 5/5/2018
I thought the story was finished cause u haven’t uploaded in a while
But it’s good I loved it
KATSandANIME chapter 38 . 3/24/2018
#ARMY
Padfoot Starfyre chapter 38 . 1/27/2018
So nice to see this updated. I ended up going back and reading through the chapters as review.
Takumi was really set out on giving up everything just to be wit Misaki. Even from the time at the party, he was already willing, and prepared to give up anything, because he fell head over heals for Misaki.
Disassociation from the Walker's, puts Him into a different situation. One that's he and Mina are not used to of the lower class. Now as long as Takumi retained his medical license, he may still be able to return to working as a doctor again. Though he more than likely needs to take a refresher course, to get up to speed. Especially since he was not actively practicing for some time.
Now he can either look for a position as a doctor that is not under the Walker's influence, or nose, or he could even open his own practice. Back up plan could also be of the offer from Tora in a pinch.(That's probably a last resort.}
To the outside world, Takumi, and Misaki's newfound relationship, may seem to be somewhat rushed. but for the limited window for Takumi and Misaki, circumstances meant that they had to act fast, or face heartbreak and separation all over again.
Hope things clear up for you.
Guest chapter 38 . 1/24/2018
Loved it
Loyalty counts chapter 38 . 1/22/2018
YAYAYAYAYA!YOU FINALLY UPDATED!WOHOOOO!
Oops, sorry that was too dramatic. I loved this chapter, especially the part where Misaki just answers that woman. Honestly I was laughing too hard. .Please update faster, I hope you get over your writers block and all!
Thank you!
Guest chapter 38 . 1/22/2018
Glad you updated. You are right the reasons you didn’t up date are reasonable. Keep up the good work!
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