Cuteness all over *-* my heart went all doki-doki, this couple is just so cute :'3

This oneshot by and large was pretty poor. You obviously need to learn a thing or two about writing, or the english language in general. Of all the characters in Hetalia, Finland is one of my favourites, but the way you wrote him completely assassinates everything I used to like about him. Also, your grammar seems slightly nonsensical in some places.

Finally: What's so difficult about writing Sweden? Just have him end every other sentence of his in "Börk", and it'll sound all right.

In conclusion: A very poor effort at writing a Hetalia oneshot, better luck next time.

Regards,
Allderasta

I know what you mean about heat. I live in India, and it's supposed to be raining right now, but it's bright sunshine and it's HUMID as HELL. Ick.

Anyway, wonderful story. I just love SuFin shots like these. They're so cute :3