I’ve binged you’re entire story in like a day and I’m pretty surprised that it doesn’t have more attention. Your writing is amazing and the story is getting really, really interesting. I’m glad you’re not just following canon events and instead, including your own original sort of “side story” to it. Maggie is such a well-developed character and I love her relationship with the crew, with her sort of sibling relationship with Jude (am I interpreting that right?, a kind of big sister/maternal relationship with Elize, her friendship with Milla, and Alvin... well, he’s Alvin.

I hope you’ll update soon, but don’t worry if you want to take your time (I’ve waited years for some other fics to update. Trust me when I say I can be patient

I Love your writing and story. Can't wait for what happens next chapter.

Oh geez! Good job! The execution of the character interactions was well done this chapter, so I got really into it even while knowing it was probably going to end with Alvin kidnapping Maggie the moment he appeared. That is to say, I was invested enough in their outing to forget about my initial misgivings for a while. Right before Alvin sent Maggie to the hill before him, I was actually starting to doubt he'd pull something!

Again, good work, and I eagerly await the next chapter!

Love the story so far, keep up the good work, and take rests when you need it.

You have no idea how glad I am to see someone consistently writing good Xillia content. Keep it up! I look forward to the next chapter!

I love how Maggie interacts with jude! this chapter hurt man

Please continue. Update again soon!

please. if you can. either make maggie give this bastard an EXTRA ass wooping, make the big boar crush a bne or two at that point, or make a random character beat his ass. E.

My one and only complaint is that maggie doesn't get a lot of one-on-one conversations with many characters. I don't recall any skits focusing on her either.

Great chapter, except for one thing. You told me Maggie will get her signature weapon (if you know what I mean) once she reaches Sharliton. So why hasn't that happen yet? Other than that, great chapter. Please update this AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.

Hey nice to see ya back. I know the "life getting in the way of writing motivation" struggle all too well, keep your chin up. Solid chapter, looking forward to more updates.

Oh hey, this story. Took me a little while to get around to reading the new chapter but I'm glad I did. I'm interested to see where things go from here and I'm glad to hear that you'll have some free time to write.

IT LIVES!
Sorry had to do that...for fun.
Anyways this chapter was really good but would trusting Alvin be a good thing for Maggie or a bad thing. hopeful we can find out soon...pretty please?

"Huh...strange she didn't have him with her this time around," he mused.

Yeaaaaahhh wouldn't that have been crazy. Can you just imagine what it would be like if the big scary man had also been there to sav- I mean capture her. In all seriousness unless my keen eye for foreshadowing has failed me, I look forward to seeing that little development boil over. Mind you like probably everyone else here I've played the game and know exactly who and what Alvin is. Still doesn't make it any less fun though watching things slowly turn.

And now I'm starting to ship your self insert with Alvin XD

I was wondering when are you gonna update this story. I was beginning to think something might've happen to you.

Anyway, now Alvin knows of Maggie's secret. I just hope it doesn't come back to haunt her, if you know what I mean. Please update this AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.