Shame, that this is only a one-shot. I was emotionally invested in it too, despite it only being a one-off. Very intriguing and fulfilling fic mate!

that was good keep the chapters coming

While I understand what the main idea behind this is. I can't help but feel the conversation after naruto woke up was wrong. You seemed to have it as a normal nonemotional moment. Just a casual conversation rather than any anger sadness regret or anything like that. The bit with the sister being sad and or confused was the only part that seemed to come out with the proper emotional context. This is not a flame. I think if you just read it word for word without paying attention to what you had in mind for the total plot you might see what I'm talking about. Otherwise the rest was well done from what I can tell. I've been going through your stories one by one and so far this is the biggest problem I've encountered. Hope you reread it and fix it. Also hope you finish some of your stories.

Wow really truly well written. Thanks

huh for a moment i thought this might of been a hollow protector story in which naruto is a hollow and becomes hinata's protector/eventual lover. ... if you want to use that please do so, it sounds good... anyway good story my friend and honestly the first time i've read a naruto/bleach story with this setting. all in all i can't wait for more my friend.

are you planning on expanding this please do you have quite a good chapter right there. The character devlops quite nicely good job please expand

Will Naruto have Zangetsu.

Wow just wow, i like were this fic is going and hope you update soon but my only prob is that it looks like another fic were naruto gets ichigo powers, since the scene with the boxes and the description of the mask are almost identical to the shattered shaft training ichigo went through, anyway update soon.

this is something i well read hope you can update when ever you can

seems interesting definitely want to read more

Interesting start. I hope this isn't the stereotypical neglect fic, and that Naruto and his family make amends.

I have to say that this is the first story i have seen with a crossover of Naruto and bleach were it is done slowly and builds its own world. Most just give him Ichigo's powers and then some and leave it at that. I also like taking the redemption angle for the neglect instead of the cold revenge rough. I am guessing that some explanation and elaboration on the nature of the neglect will come with time, but count me in as a watcher for it. I noticed the nine year comment, and was wondering what age Naruto is currently as i didn't see an age given, may just be missing it. So i'm guessing something happened around that time to change things. Also if possible can we get a physical description of Kirie, at the moment i don't have a mental image to place to the name. All and all this is just what brown phantom hinted to me it would be like and i have to say it is well worth the wait. Let me know if there is anything that i can help you with in the story, and happy writing.

Great start!

Yo man, nice work! Sorry, my fanfic account doesn't work on Google Chrome, so, you're gonna have to PM me to respond to this. Anyway, keep up the good work!

I believe it is awesome! After, you got the idea from my challenge, so, good work!