I love reading about HGFW but I couldn't get past when Arthur coming home because of the grammar. Words being used wrong or just plainly spelled wrong.

Is English your first language? You need a beta hun. Good luck!

Great chapter! Excited for more!

want to keep reading but the formatting is actually horrendous pls take some time to fix it jfc

magicalalice and anyone else who might wonder about this: it is very common to break ribs when performing CPR successfully. In fact, most patients will experience at the very least cracked ribs, if not fully broken, because the pressure you must exert onto the chest is higher than ribs can really withstand. The ribs are meant to shield the heart and lungs from blunt force so basically you have to overcome that to perform really good compressions.

So Fred was with Demelza Robins, who is younger than Hermione, 10-12 times when he was 17 and she was (at the oldest) 13? Wow...

Uh so I don't think you actively try to break people's ribs when you perform CPR, and if you do break them it's a sign that you used too much force. You're only supposed to use enough pressure to compress their chest 1.5 to 2 inches. The whole bone crunching thing was highly disturbing, maybe I missed it but a warning would have definitely been appreciated. I guess I'm enjoying the fic since I'm still reading it tho lol. But the CPR scene really bothered me, glad Bill's okay tho... Also I know this fic is from like 2014/2015 or something so you probably won't see this anyways

I kind of can't stand this fic but I also can't stop reading it. I think this is like the 3rd or 4th day in a row I've read it... I think what has bugged me the most is how much seems to go in one chapter, and it feels a bit chaotic but there are quite a few cute moments that have made it worth it I guess. Still very conflicted and confused about a lot of things, but I'm still reading which I think is a sign that I like it well enough?

Great story. Nicely written. Loved it all !

I’m 34 chapters in and I love it! The only thing I would have to say is that many chapters are repetitive. Like the same situation is told again by many characters perspectives so it’s like we’re reading the same thing over and over again but other than that I think this is an amazing story thus far.

This fanfiction is so fucking good!
I've been reading it for 2 days and I'm already on Chapter 59!
I am going to be so sad when I finish this!
The author is so fucking talented!
I'm like "Shit! This is good!"
Honestly, this is my favorite fanfiction I've read!
Thank youu so much for making this!
To the author, you are extremely talented!
Love BisexualSlytherin

Wow, this story must have taken a lot of dedication to write. I really enjoyed reading it but it was a behemoth to read. LOL. I still feel bad about Draco and you never mentioned Hermione figuring out how to destroy Malfoy Mannor. I imagined her hiring a group of giants with clubs to come and destroy it. then I thought about some major muggle Dynomite drama which is a gloriously beautiful thought. Muggle means to bring down the pureblood stronghold. hah! take that, Pureblood supremacists! Sorry that I didn't review more I kept reading until I was exhausted at night then while I was trying to go to sleep I would sometimes read some more on my phone until I was really pooped. Also, I get sucked into stories and have a hard time stopping to comment on them especially when I don't know what to say except that I am enjoying the story and am looking forward to reading more.
thanks for sharing your story.

I will be honest, I couldn't finish reading this one. I am enjoying Blinded By Lies, which I gave kudoes to on AO3, and figured I would check out this one as well. I got this far and I had to stop. It feels badly in need of an editor. The pacing seems off, and nothing feels to be flowing properly. Something that Blinded By Lies doesn't seem to suffer from.

Hermion save's fred? Interesting..

Loving the story so far. No surprise there. I just thought I would point out that Ginny would be Hermione's Matron of Honor, not a Maid of Honor since she is married at this point.

To be fair, I like the reality of your writing... Things like periods and buying houses are normal stuff... Love that you include them, rather than shoving it under the rug.