Looove your drabbles, like really they are really good

I really liked this chapter! starting bingeing a bunch of shikatema things since I (recently) found out they're endgame and I liked their characterization :) I know they're both rather brusque people but seeing them both rather gentle here was sweet, especially since they're so intimate with each other even though they're not a "thing" here yet. I loved this one a lot!

This is great

Love this! It's so sweet!

Aww, Temari's concern was so cute, and Shikamaru taking charge when he noticed the Taki nins was awesome. Absolutely loved forward to your next update.

Heehee. Cute.

I'm not sure why you apologize for the angst. It's always heart-wrenchingly perfect, and I'll eat it up everytime.

I haven't finished this collection of one-shots, so I don't know if it already exists, but I'd love to hear Shikamaru's perspective of this fight. Why was he so callous to Temari? Was he preoccupied? Why is he dissatisfied with their relationship? What's holding him back from responding to her? If he's always calculating, does his silence mean he wanted her to leave...couldn't he predict she'd walk out? Does he ever go after her?

I'm eager to know!

This was lots of fun to read. It's easy to imagine each of them having a hard time admitting their feelings to each other.

Here's a Q, if you ever felt like writing an A with the same tinge of smut - do Shikamaru and Temari ever shower together?

Thanks for the good one shots, as always.

yeah, sure, just two comrades eating together, if they had only know that in some years they would get marry and have a perfect little kid surely Shikamaru would do more than just eat together ;D
I like the chapter, i hope you write again soon...

Very beautifully written! :)

I love this! Update soon please!

Soo Cool! Loved it!

Update Soon :)

I love this chapter...I can see it as something that happened.
When Shikaku died, Shikamaru rejected words of comfort because of the war...so different from the first mission he led...and they say Temari wasn't there for Shikamaru when Shikaku died...hehe her words must have been there in his head along with his father's...

GC

Ah I like chapter 20... kinda makes me wish there was a sequel to it, but only one that took place after a considerable amount of time, cause it appears to me that something did break between the two, and no amount of hurried excuses is going to fix it.

I just have to say that this chapter is completely and utterly fabulous. XD I couldn't wipe the grin off my face for the whole chapter. My jaw hurts!