This was beautifully done!

I loved the conversation in bed, it was very sweet :) It's so sad that Hughes turned out to be like this, I would have liked for Roy to be able to be happy to see him.
Deciding to abandon a world, and children who think they're yours and love you like you're their mom, is difinitely not an easy thing to do. But Riza made the right decision, choosing to stay and fix her own world, and I'm glad she did.
The ending is great, faking their deaths and finally changing their lives to do something important. And they're really together now, after so long! I really enjoyed it!

This seriously made me contemplate my own life, I thought there might be another me somewhere having the life I'd have wanted, and I'd be devastated to know I ruined it here. So as long as there's still some time, I can make things work somehow and make some changes. This concept is very interesting, so thanks for pointing it out.
Roy here reminds me of the Roy in Conqueror of Shamballa, he looked so sad and tired, like he'd given up, but there was still that very small part of him that kept some hope.

Awesome chapter! I so happy Riza stayed with Roy ;)

I'm really interested with this new story. Chapter one was awesome. Please update soon ;)

I'm surprised you haven't gotten any reviews yet. Anyways, I found it to be very interesting. I like how you set things up and I'm very curious as to how you'll have everything play out.