That was damn good...

I do not usually read this but you got me and at the end of the story, I think I exhaled when she did! Very good

That was seriously awesome! Great ending!

Not bad. I enjoyed it.
:-)

For someone who doesn't like apocafic you write a cracking good one :-) Is it naughty to want some more ;-) ?

No, it wasn't what I had in my mind but I like your version.
I should tweet songs more often!

I like apocafic. I enjoyed this one and would love more of this type from you. You may not like apocafic, but you nailed it!

Good story!

Very nice. Like the ending.