OMG. I read red tornado as red tomato

hilarious story. thanks

Wow that was...AMAZING

Nyaa~ That was funny I really enjoy that plzzzzzz will it be okay to continue it but don't put Kid Flash with anybody and when he finds out that everyone love him... It'll be fun okay thaxx

this story is so funny i can't stop laughing good job and keep up the good work

interesting enough but none of the guys ever shown their gay i wish it was just brotherly protectiveness with the boys but other than that it's really good but i think if someone kiss rob they have the whole justice league on their backs since he is the first protege/sidekick and batman would kill or maim him but really good job

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Laugh out loud funny. Almost feel bad for the poor guy.
:P

hahahaha... overdone much? I mean with the near harem KF has.

This is cute and totally made me laugh. Nice job!

awsome! can u make more stories like this

Lol... (Sweet drop)

Review for both chapters (1-2) ok so I liked this because it was funny. However there were some things that bothered me. Not everyone had to be "in love" with kid flash to be over protective. I can understand maybe Robin being that way but everyone else ( minus Artemis since they end up going out). It'd have been better if a kidnapping or something else occurred. I can see the shock about the kiss but last time i checked isnt that a greeting in France( I could be soo wrong and then again it might be on the cheek). Anyway everyone " lusting" after kid flash was creepy imo. The other thing that bothered me is that theres no way the Bat would be more protective over Wally than Robin. He may be equally protective but not more.

In all honesty an expansion on this would be nice with some changes and more details put in. Please dont let what I put discourage you because you are a good writer. Will follow to see if you put out more.

thanks for the read

Hahahaha! They are so over protective! This is awesome!

So that could have been a lot better. I liked the plot a lot, and it was well executed. But the whole everyone having a crush on him was actually kinda unnerving. I was really sleeved out, and almost closed out of the tab. The whole thing with omen was creepy, but in a plot driven way. They didn't have to lust after him in order to be protective.