U could summarize the chapters with comments in between

Plz hurry I miss the story

Seriously? What about all those Reading Twilight books? I call unfair. I know you can legally used excerpts but there is also a limited number of consecutive lines allowed. So sorry for your trouble. Maybe another site like Writers Coffee shop or An Archive of Our Own or posting to a blog would work in place of fanfiction. Keep me posted and good luck! Thanks for sharing your talent.

Hi,

Your story seems to repost whole sections of the original source material (Some Girls Bite by Chloe Neill).

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We suggest replacing them with writing of your own creation. You can still have a 'Read The Books' kind of story, but please do not reproduce whole sections of the copyrighted source material, just have the characters reacts to the events. If you wish, you can give a reference (e.g. 'Chapter 1 of Book' or 'The scene where this characters does that to that character') which would work just as well.

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Other than some typos, it's not bad. Some funny comments but I am looking forward to seeing how knowing what happens will start to change their choices. Thanks for sharing your talent.

are you going to continue with this story?

This is amazing xD please keep writing, their reactions are soooo well written hilarious :D.

Gotta say, you are off to a pretty good start. The comments are appropriate to the characters and witty too. Shame you haven't updated in so long. Thanks for sharing.

that is so cool. i love this story. can you uptade more, please.

Hope you bring in the other characters soon! So good so far, don't stop now. ;)

Update soon! loving this story so far! Hands up if your a fan of Chicagoland Vamps! XD

Please continue, this is really good. :)

Please please update soon! I am so loving this story!

I think I am going to love this story. I always love this kind of story especially when they are funny

This is really good. You should continue. Plus this is one of my fav book series