This was very beautiful! I loved it! So many emotions! Malec is soo cute! Glad to read stories about them (mpreg alec is my favorite)

This was such a beautiful chapter! I'm so happy you're back to writing now. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Awwww. Poor babies!

I read this in class, and your ending almost brought me to tears. Not my finest moment in front of my teacher. Who just had to see what I was reading. It may have made him a little upset too. But, it was such a great one-shot. I loved it. Although I wish they would've decided to keep her, it would've saved all of us tears!

wow this chapter is so good! Although it might not be a completely happy ending, I like the bittersweet reality and how you handle their emotions and thoughts. Really love this chapter :D!

My heart! I love this soooo much. Out of all of the one shots and stories that I've read, I have never read one that was this honest and true. Most would have them change their mind about the adoption, but I'm glad you had them keep hat same decision! Great chapter (as always)

That's it I cry

Ewwwww

The storyline was good, but I'm going to be honest with you that I don't like the ending. It was selfish. Yes, the path of giving an innocent baby a future is tough, especially that they are both so young, but that's not an excuse to give out your child to others. Their family supported them, so why should they abandon their child? They just denied their child's right to know her rightful parents. I am not an orphan, but I understand the pain they felt when you have to transfer from various homes and trying to adapt and fit in to a new family because you don't have a choice. and in case the adoption won't work you will be back in the orphan again. It's horrible. It's like you're begging for love, care, attention, family, when your original family can give it to you. Not all orphans are born lucky to land a loving and accepting family. I believe in the saying that if there's a will, then there's a way. I am just so disappointed about Magnus and Alec, especially Alec, for being irresponsible here. I am sorry but I am just quite emotional with this since it involves irresponsibility (in which one of the main traits that I absolutely hate, it kills any respect I have for a person), as well as innocent children suffering because of the stupidity of its parents. I didn't mean to discourage you or insult you as a person with this. I am just expressing my opinion about the said story.

did you mean to leave this chapter in the middle of a sentence. otherwise I love it so far.

The joys of parenthood! Great chapter as always..

Nice, really nice. And I'm so glad for the update. Take care.

Cute chapter! 3

It's good. Funny how the baby unintentionally cockblocks them. Lol. :)

Not easy to have a baby, very cute as chapter. Wait to read the next