Reviews for Breaking Barriers
Krisss2 chapter 1 . 8/18/2019
This is so good! I love the process of Marco learning from ace and enjoyed every word of it! I just wish we got some of the answers of Marcos past. If you don’t think your going to continue it-which I totally understand and respect, long fics are /insane/—I was wondering if you had any notes for the rest of it. Or could tell me something to date my curiosity. It’s just, shy Marcos so precious! And I need to know why! Or something from Marcos’s POV? But that would be a lot to ask and I hate when people pressure me so that’s the last thing I wanna do. Just know that this story, like all of your other ones, is amazing.
Vongola10 chapter 13 . 6/4/2019
Please continue with your story I love it so much
Jujub2001 chapter 13 . 9/7/2018
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGgg. I can't even start to describe how much I love this story. Your writing is brillant. One would have thought that because of Marco's lack of knowledge in the language, his character would be OOC, but no, he is not *applauds*. UGH I'm hoping you"ll post an update one day (as its been a year since the last one). You can't leave with so many things unresolved! I still want to know what really happened to Marco for him to be trapped in that cave, what's the explanation behind his powers, I want to read Luffy's hilarious reaction to him, Marco's reaction to the city, the no-hunting, read about the adventure discovering the dishwasher will be. And we need further explanations such as what's Marco's first language (he must have one or was he always trapped in bird form, thus knowing none), why does he know so much about sex (my theory is that he was some sex god and that would maybe explain why he was locked in that cave, as some people might have feared him). You also seem to have hinted that Marco may have had a previous demanding lover and there was trust issues in that relationship (or maybe I'm reading things wrong). I was thinking if you do update one day, could you please, please, please, please, please give us a chapter (or a couple :) from Marco's POV ? It would be interesting, funny and help characterplot development. Anyways, all this to tell you not to lose hope in this story, that I'm sure I'm not the only one who wants more, and that I look forward to future updates...

Lots of appreciation,
Jujub 2001
sira chapter 13 . 1/10/2018
hey :)
i really like this story!
i need to know where marco is coming from! and why he couldnt speak before he met ace...
please update soon! marco in de 21st centurie...i really wanna read this

lg
This Username Is Classified chapter 13 . 10/6/2017
Oooo, the time has finally come! I'm actually surprised that Marco would be so willing to join Ace if he supposedly has lived in the forest for.. Idk. I think Marco would panick a bit at first but eventually adapt fine, I'm not sure XD Can't wait to see how it goes!
This Username Is Classified chapter 2 . 10/6/2017
Because the way to Ace's heart is food XDD
EmpressKira chapter 13 . 7/6/2017
Ah, this story is very nice~! I am very curious on what exact Marco has gone through to be in that cave? But like, I excited to see him in town! I love Marco being enthused about playing around with Ace~! This is sooo good~! I can't wait until next chappie! But until then~!
Flowingfrost chapter 13 . 7/2/2017
I just found this story yesterday, and blazed through it. I love it. The interactions between Marco and Ace and great. The teaching and learning moments are great, and the unexpected problems and reactions interesting. The interaction between these two personalities are warm, funny, and fascinating. I also like how the sex scenes feel like an organic part of the progression of their relationship. Last but not least, I really excited to learn about Marco's reaction to the 21 century, his back story, and also his interaction with Luffy and Sabo. Thank for sharing!
FIREmizuchi chapter 13 . 6/23/2017
I absolutely love the story so far! Please continue with your valiant efforts to make more chapters! :D
Rhianna chapter 13 . 6/21/2017
Just reread this whole story again and I love it! Can't wait to see how Marco deals with civilization, poor Marco. Probably going to be in a daze. Anyway love reading your stories and excited to read more whenever you get the chance to update.
Hanck-Chaan chapter 13 . 5/31/2017
Please tell me that this wonder of Fic will continue .. I'm loving every bit of it !

Do not delay to post the next chapter, I'll be waiting angrily.

kiss .. (/)/
Guest chapter 13 . 5/10/2017
I hope you pick up where you left off in next chapter, the smut was just getting good
Mylne chapter 13 . 5/2/2017
yeah! A new chapter! I really love this fic! Finally, Marco is soon going to the 21th century! I think he has study hard for it, and Ace will be there for him ~!
And a little bit of sexyness at the end with some mystery! Now I am all curious about Marco's past!
Thank you so much for writing! you are a fantastic author!
Aerle chapter 13 . 4/9/2017
It was smart of Ace to take videos, those seem to work well on Marco. But how he'll react on the real deal...

Thank you for sharing!
yola1996acuario chapter 13 . 4/5/2017
Odd. That moment you realize that also Marco can get nervous lol.
About your question... for sure he'll freak out so... he's going to faint, maybe? If it's that I don't want to be the one near Ace and his future swears.
Ps. Marco is sexy as hell!
~Read~you~soon~
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