sube mas capitulos esta historia esta muy buena no la dejes perder

PLEASE UPDATE THIS! I NEED TO KEEP ON READING THIS! ITS AMAZING! and btw its awesome of how Naruto is adapting to his new life

I decided play halo 1,2,3.4,5 ODST and reach all again so i been looking for some good Halo fanfic when I stumbled upon that the Noble Team and rookie 12 survive reach I have my finger cross. Please update soon.

Good stuff man

Great story. You just need to work on some of your grammar. Nothing major, though.

Greetings, here's hoping that this review finds you well, and still writing! I must say, I was intrigued by the description, and I find myself having enjoyed the plot, the premise and the story line for this fic, and I find I am hungering for more in the story! I am actually hoping it isn't dead, simply on hiatus until such time as your muse decides to let the next chapters go, and release them from her hands into yours! One thing for your information, pre-mission discussion of information is called "briefing", after action/mission, when they discuss what happened, and all that, that's debrief(ing). Not a major issue, just wanted to clear that up in case you decide to go back and change it. I am hoping that you will bring Naruto through all of the games, and his team as well, and have them go through with Chief. However you manage to change the story for the Halo-verse is going to be interesting no matter what, but I look forward to reading how your going to do that! I am also wondering if your going to have UNSC military provide Naruto with more kunai and shuriken in the future so he doesn't need to keep using his personal (all he has left of his home dimension) supply, and is he going to reveal that he actually knows how to make the explosive tags, but he is the only one that can use them? Or are you possibly going to make him a S-III? or possibly a IV or V? With out need of any real enhancements obviously! LOL, anyways, again, here's hoping that this finds you well, and still writing, if this story is dead, maybe an author's note to let everyone know?

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Your chapters are really nice and my favorite part was her reaction to his story :)

this has got ta be one of the best freaking crossovers possible

... ... ... ... the interactions are well short and feel like some one just summarized the dictionary by caling it: thick and comprehensive. What it should of said was: It is a book detailing the meaning of the engish language with nouns and pronouns and proper gramer and ways the word could be used in proper context as an example of characterization, showing the context in which the word or word's might have multiple meanings.

Dude killer story please update

Your story Is amazing. But I see that you didn't update from quite some time and if you have the Author Block (that had caused me to leave unfinished some of my fiction, it's a bane) I can give you my help.

I'm not an amazing beta reader. But i'm full of ideas and i'm willing to help if you need it.

Amazing story. Bye

Please continue this story. It is the most complete Halo story done right out there. Please don't abandon this story, DimensionalJumper!

I hope you continue this story because its a really good one.

Amazing story you have here also I have a question is their a pairing or no? If there is I think Naruto should be paired with Kat the reason? Besides from there being one or two stories with her as one of the pairings then I think hers and Narutos personality works well with each other plus she seems like the kind of person that could handle his personality so those are my thoughts you don't have to listen to it if you don't it's cool if you do its also cool anyway can't wait for the next chapter keep up the good work