That was a nice short story

A fun, interesting read! Thanks for writing!

This was a good story. Funny with a twist on Videl and Gohan getting together. I wish the writer would continue writing this story.

Ha ha ha, that's an awesome way to end! This story was actually really good. Thanks!

J'aime bien mais cela vient peut être un peu vite.

You should make a sequel where Erasa and Videl join the Z-gang. Maybe have them face the H.E.S.F. in a spy off or war games sort of thing.

It's me! Sorry. I have to say, i LOVED this story. Next time you play five nights at Freddy's (if you play it, of course) I wont kill you. Or will I? Ha ha ha ha ha ha. AH Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha. HA HA HA HA HA HA!

interesting story :)

i like this

It's a nice story, I'm just a bit sad it ended now I guess. I was hoping Gohan would confront Hercule and Sharpner about what they did more. Oh well, thanks for the ride! I can't wait for your next story!

I love this story, thank god you're updating again! One thing about the new chapter, if you let hercule kill chi chi you better have an awesome backup plan or gohan is gonna murder the entire universe.

Can't wait to see what happens next

I think that you finished the story without explaining a few things to us. Like, what happened to Hercule and Sharpner?

The chapter definitely not the best one. To leave it on such a low note seems likes such a waste, especially since it started like a good story with a lot of potential. Anyways those are my two cents.

...Well this chapter pretty much ruined it for me... Im sorry but there is no way in hell Gohan would have just let Hurcule go, I mean he tried to kill his mother! There was just zero closure... I mean what ended up happening with Hurcule and Sharpner? Ugh... I'm sorry but this was kind've a horrible ending...