Please update this!

Love it

Why give the big long winded speech on alchemy if nobody else can do it? Especially the fear part, isn't that a BIT redundant? Just don't teach anyone else OR else (as author) nobody else CAN use alchemy, then all that stuff is just POMP. It's more or less just a bloodline (like the wood release or the sharringan or the rinnegan, you can do A LOT of different things with it, it's not limited to just "seeing or smelling things").

Other then that, not bad at all.

So naruto is 22 BY SHIPPUDEN? (omg he's an OLD MAN by ninja standards!) 19 3 years training trip, 22! WOW that's three years older then EVEN IRUKA (a school teacher) was when he became chunin (the nineteen) heck by shippuden I think naruto is OLDER in this one then irukia is in canon NORMALLY. (ninja just don't normally LIVE very long, think every year like in terms of DOG years) Naruto MIGHT be able to get away with it, but it's gonna make him even more of an ODDITY with his peers.

goddamnit let Orochi bite him, the stone will fucking eat him.

Hmm so guessing someone's soul has entered the stone wonder who's anyways keep up the great work!

Interesting stuff looking forward to more

This has potential

got to agree with .3950 didn't think I'd see this really go anywhere

Truth be told Tremor I thought you had put this and Arcadia School of Magic on the Back Burner, glad I was wrong tbh.

its ok but i want a chapter of the reading the prince of storms.

Nice chapter man. Looks like things are really getting interesting now.

So Good, keep it up.

This is too good, hope to read more soon.

really love this story cant wait for new chapters