Aw i loved this so damn much. Thank you

I love it.
I really really can't tell you how much I actually was starving for a good fanfic when I found yours.

You wrote marvelously qnd the details, the feelings, the darkness... it was all perfect. Well done.

I've added your wonderful fanfic (it's prequel too) to my favs!
Keep up the good work ;)

So. Amaya's brother can heal people, but Charles can't walk? Maybe you shouldn't have made a healer out of Amaya's brother. It doesn't seem like Amaya lived that long.

will you please do a story for the apocalypse movie with Amaya in it

omg yes I love you XD your an amazing g writer I actuallyread your first story but stopped because I couldn't follow it and then I restarted it 2days ago and im so happy I did I love this story so much it was perfect and I love how it ended even the you know who died it was still amazing g and I hope to read mote of your work

'All At Once' by Janelle Howard is scarily similar to this fic. Wanna check it out?

Will u do X-Men Apocalypse?

Please write a story for Amaya and Charles during X-Men Apocalypse.

Thank you so much! I have really enjoyed reading your story. It was perfect! I was able to picture it all in my head and the characters were so believable. I am in owe of you. Thank you again!

loved it.

Nice start.

You made an ending for this story and gave its characters something but u know they are making x-men: apocalypse soon u should check it out to another story of X-men

It's all messed up when you read the final chapter, makes it difficult to read

um... it's just...like... a bunch of...did you upload from a word document? cause...it didn't upload right. Unless it's just me XD

loved it!