Please oh please update, you've updated your story about temperance sister, why not updated this story?

Just when I got disappointed in you for not updating for a whole you come back!
This is the second time actually XD
whenever I go to my Favs List I'd be like "I wish this writer would update..." and then BAM!
THEY DO!
I'll do that everyday if I has to just to read your story!

I likes this chapter! And what i like most is how you don't describe the scenery or the people around so that we could get a feel of her blindness. Keep that up! You have managed to show true Law, he doesn't sound too OOC

Will there be a time - skip?

Good luck with the next chapter!

Me gusta:) in my opinion not as good as against the tide, but thats because that has like 30 chapters and this ones only starting out... I'll love it soon! Im sure of it! :D

YAY NEW CHAPTER! I really liked it can't wait for the next one and I can't wait to find out more about Temperance's relationship with Johanna. I'm ready for the Law and Temperance moments! :D

this is so funny. i think you're doing just fine with laws personality and temperance is a really good character.

Waaaah that scene, I REMEMBER THAT SCENE!
Ooooh please update, I wanna know what happens after chapter 2 so badly... and I'm saying this without having read chapter two yet! :D
Overall, I'm excited that I've finally found a good pair of stories that actually intertwine well with one another!

ooh! dayum girl! this it getting good

YAY SECOND CHAPTER! I screamed when saw this I really did I was so happy.

I really hope you continue on writing this story. When I read the first chapter I was like "I want to know MORE!" But then you stopped for months TTTT

I really like the story already and I'm looking forward to next chapter :D

I'm keeping up with the manga! I cried too! I was aways for 2 weeks so when I came back I read 2 chapters in one day! It felt awesome and I cried and I was happy?! It felt weird

Yay! An update! Haha I like it!

This looks like it will be an awesome story I feel terrible for not finding it sooner please update this soon and I feel terrible for not finding YOU sooner and reading more of your stories which I am going to do.

TempyXLaw... me gusta

Please make more chapters soon! This is such a great beginning to a wonderful story and I REALLY want to know what will happen! Your a great writer!

I like your beginning. I feel a little scared about her going with a complete stranger and that's what makes it exciting. I hope you update soon

QnQ jus tell me she and lis meets again...please (only noticed this story now u.u)