| Reviews for Warrior |
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   PipersDivergent4life chapter 35 . 8/22/2014 That was a better ending... I would ignore my other review. |
| FourTrisLover chapter 37 . 8/22/2014 Thank god! |
| Four six Tobias tris chapter 37 . 8/22/2014 You are evil |
| Anon chapter 4 . 8/22/2014 Dude, I dont want to sound mean, but you have way too many mistakes in ur story. Please start to check it over. Plus I think that you shiuld slow down the pace. |
| PipersDivergent4life chapter 36 . 8/21/2014 Wow... At first until this chapter this story was amazing. I came to read fanfiction because I don't like the ending of the last book. It now haunts me and I can believe you would do that. Veronica had an educated reason but you have none and you just made anybody who was stupid enough to read this fanfiction very pissed. I can believe I read this |
| Four six Tobias tris chapter 36 . 8/21/2014 AHHHH what? No! She died? No no no no no! |
| PipersDivergent4life chapter 14 . 8/12/2014 I live in the US (unfortunately) so I am just checking football for you guys is soccer for us and American football for you guys is football for us? Great story BTW |
| Amityswiftie chapter 35 . 8/10/2014 It was good, although a bit confusing... But I mostly get it. |
| My-Hayley-28 chapter 35 . 8/10/2014 I can't wait for the next chapter! This story is awesome! |
| Four six Tobias tris chapter 35 . 8/9/2014 Ok I get it now update soon! Pls don't make Tris go away! Please! :'( |
| Four six Tobias tris chapter 28 . 8/9/2014 Ok I loved this at the begining. But now I'm tottally confused. I'm on chapter 28. Can you please explain. |
| Snug As A Pug In A Rug chapter 35 . 8/9/2014 What the heck?! I'm sorry, but I'm confused right now. Is the part where you go Me- Tobias- Like that, is that texting or talking in real life? Sorry, I'm just confused. YESSSSS I LOVE CITY OF BONES AND THE WHOLE MORTAL INSTRUMENTS SERIES MORE THAN TFioS AND MAYBE EVEN A LITTLE MORE THAN THE DIVERGENT TRILOGY BECAUSE TMI HAS A HAPPY ENDING. Marcus is EVILLLLL. And, for the whole, "who-takes-who" prom thing, Tris, Christina, Will, Mar, and Uri and all not seniors. The only seniors are Tobias, Zeke, and Shauna. So it wouldn't really work out, would it? Never mind, I like the version where they all go to prom better. So just keep your version. Please. Ignore me, I'm rambling. Please update and DFTBA });({ Lilly |
| Snug As A Pug In A Rug chapter 33 . 8/9/2014 OMG! A SIGNED COPY OF TFioS! Holy Hephaestus! (PJO...) I wish I had a boyfriend like Tobias... when I get one. :P Hey, I'm only 13! Ok, you said, "Singed" that means: A. Slightly or barely burnt by fire B. Improper grammar for "sung" You meant to say, "Signed". Sorry, I just am pretty much obsessed with grammar. I especially hate it when people spell "grammar", "grammer". It makes me mad for some reason. Again- Please for the longer chapters! DFTBA });({ Lilly |
| Snug As A Pug In A Rug chapter 32 . 8/9/2014 YESSSSSS. I LOVE BOOM CLAP. ITS ONE OF MY FAVORITE SONGS! I also really like this story. I do wish you'd make the chapters longer though. DFTBA });({ Lilly |
