| Reviews for Metal Doesn't Matter |
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aquarius89 chapter 16 . 4/9/2019 I love this story, please update soon. I would like to read what happens next and I curious. Plead update the story. Thank you. |
Armygirl64 chapter 16 . 11/12/2018 this is the best story on here please update |
Wolfcrystar14 chapter 16 . 7/27/2018 Please continue |
Lady-Stesonora chapter 16 . 12/27/2016 Really good, no amazing story! Can you update soon? Please? Please don't leave it at a cliffhanger like this! |
Gaby0520 chapter 16 . 1/13/2016 This is totally one of my all-time favorite stories I've ever read in the Transformers fandom -. Granted I had a few worries at first; such as Silverbolt pre-2-month-killing-spree becoming somewhat unidimensional, (it eventually became a cycle of worse thing, then worser, then worser) but it didn't become very Mary Sue I find, nor is the aforementioned really bad; it may just be my opinion. But I LOVE what you did to her after coming back. She's new, she's badass, she's found a purpose, and she's flourished being distanced from the base and all the crazy going on there. I love the characterization going on, particularly how her weapons were basically fitted to her strength (I don't know why I love that so much...). At first I was unsure about how you've written out Elita-1 to be, but for the sake of the story it makes sense, and I like that they reach somewhat amends after Silver comes back with news about Tenspeed. As there are few female characters in the TF franchise, I am weary of people who write her out to be, well, like you did, but that's just an opinion of mine. Still a very good fic :D As far as characterization goes, I find that you've grasped the characters pretty well. If anything, I find it goes a little OOC when Optimus gets mad, like when he pushed Prowl against the wall and when he's interacting with Elita, but I feel that's written purposely to really see the effect Silver has on him. Pretty long review, sorry! It's actually my first review. I just really liked this fic, and I felt that I needed to write something. Hope to see more chapters in the future! :) |
AutobotGuy710 chapter 16 . 12/28/2015 Great chapter yet again. And wow, that was a twist at the end! Keep it up! |
RougeReaper chapter 16 . 12/28/2015 Love it please update soon |
adelphe24 chapter 15 . 11/16/2015 I just have to say that it better not end there. Because that would be horribly cruel to me and anyone else who has read so far. You must update! |
PrimalScreamer chapter 15 . 8/27/2015 Elita-1 feels pretty OOC to me. Feels more like she's just being made purposefully that way for story reasons. Having your OC named Silverbolt really threw me off as there is already a transformer named Silverbolt who is the leader of the gestalt that forms Superion. |
Guest chapter 15 . 8/22/2015 WHAT! NO! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO N-O U CANT DO THIS! WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! U better update soon or I'll... I'll... I'll Oh I don't know. Just update soon please. |
AutobotGuy710 chapter 15 . 8/7/2015 Wow, that was crazy intense! And Tenspeed is such a creep! Great chapter, keep it up! |
RougeReaper chapter 14 . 6/24/2015 This is great please update soon |
AutobotGuy710 chapter 14 . 5/11/2015 Great chapter yet again, keep it up! |
ManyGamePlayer chapter 14 . 5/11/2015 I can't wait for the next update! ;) |
AutobotGuy710 chapter 13 . 2/11/2015 YAY! Another chapter! And yay, glad you got that Beta you wanted! This was a great chapter. But man, this does not sound like a good situation for the Autobots to be in. I definitely feel nervous for everyone involved. Anyways, keep up the great work, as always! |