How stupid is your UNSC? I mean, really, no one puts two and two together that the only faction with the ability to take down AI's, and strings ONI up by there nuts? NO ONE AT ALL?

More handwavium for the CIA in space and justifying of their plot armour.

i like.

more?

Goddamn Parangosky. She always was a bitch. Still, nuking Earth to oblivion? That would never happen.

I don't remember 95% of what's going on anymore, so I'm going to have to re-read this when I get the time and get back to you.

this gets better and better.

Love the adama speech. So say we all! Long live humanity!

Love the BSG motto. So say we all!

Huh, the Flood invade Reach. Honestly didn't see that one coming.
Keep it up!

Amazing story, just enough tactical and strategic understanding to make the story interesting from that standpoint however your OCs are also personable and add much to the narrative. Well done. You have clearly worked very hard on this. Looking forward to your next chapter.

That bitch Parangosky is responsible for the lives lost at Earth no matter how she wants to cloak it with here bullshit. She was directly responsible, and is too paranoid to remain in control. Get rid of the idiot now.

very good new chapter, I hope soon they catch or kill the damned prophet.

Making the loyalists fight harder is actually a strategic advantage, given the mentality of the Brutes. It will make them more predictable and more easily lured into attacking prepared defenses and traps.

The Crusades? Dude, that isn't what happened in any crusade in the slightest. In fact, most of them were in support of the Middle East Muslims because their leadership was Christian-sympathetic. Bandit clearing, repelling invaders, that sort of thing and most of the Crusades were co-operative joint operations between the Christians and the Muslims. I'm not sure where this generally popular view of the Crusades as some sort of religions genocide came from, but I'm guessing Hollywood.

That Reach was burning while Insurrectionists were attacking its best chance of survival will be excellent anti-Insurrection propaganda. Probably enough to get a lot of Innies to heel-face turn in disgust.

I like it. This may be an old-ish story, but this is a pretty good beginning and quite reasonable in the changes it makes to canon.

The attack on Hydra station is almost exactly what happened to Pearl Harbor. The radar operators picked up something and the commanders assumed it was reversed and it was ships coming from California. It wasn't.