3 IN LOVE WITH YOUR STORY 3

At this point my issue is less with the fighting and more with the fact that you haven't established why they're even interested in each other. Neither has said what they like about the other, so it's hard to understand why it's worth it to them to go through all this crap to be together. What's the point, what do they get out of it?

Great story!
-Sammi

Update

I don't get why Rachel and Puck are even together. They are constantly fighting, and very rarely have happy moments. There's no basis for any kind of relationship. You almost spend more time building relationships between every one else except them.