Reviews for Naruto Senju : Asura's Heir
Ryusui Asakura chapter 1 . 5/1
Will this fanfic continue?
Irusha the Kitsune chapter 11 . 10/23/2019
Oof- When's the next chapter...?
Guest chapter 4 . 6/12/2019
I have to say I was extremely bored reading this chapter. It's basically a near word for word retelling of canon events in a somewhat drawn out fashion with a ton of details anyone who watched or read Naruto would find redundant.
Please note that this is only applicable to this chapter and not the ones before as those give us the backstory we did not know.
SkyrimEmpress chapter 11 . 5/17/2019
Please update!
bloodline 69 chapter 11 . 3/26/2019
continue the story update some chapters interesting turn of events in in chapter 12
ramisa2001 chapter 1 . 3/10/2019
I don’t mean to rain on your pirade or do anything he’ll you might not even see this but if Jiraiya is directly related to the Nidaime then Tsunade and Jiraiya relationship would be incestual since well the Shodai and the Nidaime are actually brothers...
ProperPie chapter 11 . 6/23/2018
I liked the story, it’s just that I’m a bit upset that in the beginning when Tsunade left Minato(Hashirama as she named him) in an orphanage. That, and that she thought he died because of what Mito told her when he was actually just adopted. I disliked that she wasn’t aware of him being her son and didn’t get to bond with him as a mother should, heck she didn’t even tell Jiraiya about Minato. I know, quite a bit of dislike but I can’t help it, made me lose interest until recently actually because I completely forgot about it.
Kesshi Uzumaki chapter 11 . 4/8/2018
Please update
Guest chapter 11 . 3/8/2018
hope you make more.
oppaihammer chapter 4 . 10/6/2017
all the changes in your story leads to it being exactly similar to canon..i am done
oppaihammer chapter 1 . 10/6/2017
the whole first chapter is something everyone knows from cannon..why do you have to repeat it in such a lengthy way?
oppaihammer chapter 1 . 10/6/2017
wouldnt your theory make tsunade and jeraiya cousins?
Bosma19 chapter 11 . 7/30/2017
Please update
Yurushimo chapter 7 . 3/16/2017
Also, don't include so many flashbacks. They're annoying, especially when they're long.
Yurushimo chapter 4 . 3/16/2017
You really did not need to include the kyuubi attack. It's used im pretty much every fanfiction and it's no different from the others.
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