Amazing detail, great characters, can't wait to read more

I'll be waiting for your next update.

Well, let’s see where this goes.

very nice, holy hell it's very nice.

Ok dude what the actual fuck, how the hell do you manage to mix up names with the characters like this

It updated! Amazing, I never expected that.

I reread through this, and I can definitely see the improvements from the third rewrite. Hopefully the next update is coming soon! I’m eager to see official first contact.

How dare you have an OC named Cutter? No two people could have the same name! /s

And now we wait again. Welcome back.

talk about blue balls when i read this only to find out it hasn't been updated in quite awhile.

god I hope this is continued somehow.

I know you’re busy and all, but those late updates are beginning to be infamous. I can understand three or six months but it’s been more of a year since a new chapter. By the way, it’s funny how a bunch of alien AI generals argue like humans or any sapient species in general, make them more relatable.
And more Big Bang theory and Taiga humor, please.

sure I like it so far but if these witch manage to damage a UNSC Battlecruiser then I will be done cause all they have are WWII weapon sure they can kill Neurois but they are using magic to kill them and what make it worse they have to get mid range of them. the only way they can destroy the ship is blowing up the reactor core that it plus I highly thing that a standard UNSC Marine Rifle because it using hard light Round way stronger then WWII armor piecing rounds and even I the witches get close to the ship they have to dodge Archer missiles and not get wasted by the MAC Cannon. sure there are less UNSC Soldiers in the ship but there trained and battled harden then these girls Quality over quantity I say plus I highly doubt the world of Strike witches would rather be attack by two fronts and seeing how the world works in there I say there losing more people then winning if your counting how many of them die just to win a skirmish

I still remember what this story was originally written...

But after a while, I was willing to give this fic another shot to see if it will grow on me and that I may give it another chance;... it hasn't... in fact rereading this gave me a headache at how you drastically changed the Strike Witches compared to the original material.

I wish you had just made a new separate fic instead of overwriting everything and just keep the original story as it were for those of us who enjoyed it. So in the end... I will NOT refollow this and just pretend it never existed.

please cont

In order:
Dunno about the first, Star Trek maybe?
Babylon 5
Green Lanterns
Star Wars Ep 4
Dead Space (maybe? only thing I know of with moons that have tentacles and like to feast on humans)
Terminator 3

Very nice.I can't wait for first contact between the Witches and the their reactions gonna be spectacular once they see that it wasn't a Neuroi orbiting outside earth but fellow Humans (with some aliens) that are capable to match or harass them Neurois with their high/advance tech.
Can't wait for the next 's the approximate release of the next chapter?