For the first fanfiction you've ever made this is AWESOME! I don't believe you when you say this is your first fanfiction. This is way to good to be a first.

Dear past me,

This is absolute bullshit, this is why you don't have any friends you stupid fuck. Learn how to spell and maybe you won't get such shitty marks in high school. Nobody cares about your stupid fanfiction you insignificant tool. Your life is a faliure, I'm disappointed in you. You could have had a social life but instead you wasted your time writing a fanfiction that looks likes it been written by a drunk chicken. I apologize to anyone who's had to read this bullshit. Maybe you could spend your time continuing something useful to society instead of whatever the fuck this is.

Sincerely,
Someone who really doesn't want to be you right now

Oh my

Yay! Fluttershy's stare is that powerful? Wow! I really should not mess with that girl.

hi my name is robert sikes i am a huge fan of tmnt i thike it cude nervr happny but if it could i hope this happn on tv as a crosover eipsdo

This is sooooo awesome love it

This is not good what will happen now wow excellent job bravo.

um hello? DISCORD? Getting his head slammed...he could easily transformed Raph into a cockroach or something less fierce...

Dude seriously the name is so stupid it isn't funny the portal come on dude

hey, how come Discord gets to use his magic in their universe, but the others can't?

hahahahaha...l am trying so hard to see Fluttershy giving Shredder the Stare...even harder 2 c Shredder back down as a result!

l love how Mikey is DEFINITELY making an impression on Rarity...cute!

I would breack discords neck like omg.

Wish so much emotion here wow I'm speechless bravo.

Woah! Go raph! This s funny. My favorite tmnt character fighting my favorite mlp character XD