| Reviews for Phoenix Fire |
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SavageDawn chapter 1 . 1/2/2018 omg! this fic is amazing~ plz write a sequel? |
shirosakura911 chapter 1 . 10/2/2017 please update.. I want to know what happened next |
sanjiism chapter 1 . 4/10/2016 this is so beautiful. will you continue? poor ace and marco can't have their relationship hanging just like that. omg please |
Reminiscence Awry chapter 1 . 3/30/2016 This was a fun story, I would love to read a sequel if you decided to write one. It feels so wrong to leave Ace with the Marines, especially knowing that they would likely reject him more than the 'evil pirates' would if they discovered his heritage. Though perhaps Marco could help him realize that. I love how you incorporated a little ASL into the plot, it gives the story a little more depth and raises the stakes. |
emygrl99 chapter 1 . 3/8/2016 Awe, this was sad, but happy at the same time, and I loved Ace's nicknames for Marco xD though I'm sad Ace didn't go with him :c YOU BETTER WRITE THOSE SEQUELS! I jest, but still, if you ever want write them, I would totally not be upset (; thanks for writing! |
AndurilofTolkien chapter 1 . 1/26/2016 aw :) |
mysteryreader6626 chapter 1 . 11/14/2015 PLEASE TELL ME THERE IS A SEQUEL FOR THIS! I NEED ONE! PLEASE! |
Wera chapter 1 . 10/20/2015 Ahh, that was sooo beautiful! But the ending is really sad and I'm crying and agh, your writing is so beautiful it hurts. I really love how you wrote the relationship between them and how it was rather mysterious! |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2015 I love this story I hope you get to do the sequal! |
Alexzandria chapter 1 . 3/24/2015 One of the best stories I have ever read I mean it was just wonderfull I absolutely love their relationship. I mean most people go for the one- deny their feels for thirty chapters just to have steemy sex and realize they loved each other the whole time or two- the have sex two days after the meet and live happily ever after with a couple chapters of depression, daddy issues, and the marines ( mostly akuina) being total doushbag sucking genital pieces. But you not you. You have one I the sweetest most realist in a unrealistic world romances I have seen and I absolutely love it. It is absolutely genius when he realizes that ace helped him escape Also after dropping enough hints for me to check for the next chapter every day for the next month you had better well write a sequal ( if you love your readers cuase we all love you and you work) Ps I laughed my ass off everytime he calls him fluffy. Partially cuase I kept imagining that once Marco took him to the moby dick ( which I am praying will eventually happen) that ace would slip up and call him that at some serious moment and Marco would never live it down for actually responding. I mean just imagine the look on his face( : Thank you for writing this and I look forward to the sequal |
AnyMoreBrightIdeasGenius chapter 1 . 11/10/2014 It's sweet and sad at the same time, and I really wanted Ace to go with Marco! I would love a sequel, because I want to see happy Ace surrounded by the crew and him and Marco being happy together. You're such a great writer, I love reading your stories. Thank you for sharing this one! |
Mad Y u e chapter 1 . 9/24/2014 omggggg I loved the storyyya sdgsjk so cute, so original so saaaaad ;w; kajshdjskdhas i want that sequeeeel -rolls- Aceeee Marcooo and Saboooahsdjashd you're so mean -heavy breathing- Ilu ahsjdhasd |
Hanabi Angel Ai chapter 1 . 9/23/2014 I love it! so cute / thanks! |
Fushicho92 chapter 1 . 8/9/2014 Pleassse a sequel :D I want Ace to find him again XD that brat should have said yes, you don't find love like that a lot in life :) but really great |
Ayz283 chapter 1 . 7/19/2014 I LOVE IT! GODAMNIT! WHY DID YOU END IT THERE?! WHY IS THERE NO HAPPY ENDING? I'M A SUCKER FOR HAPPY ENDINGS. Anyways, it was wonderfully written and absolutely amazing |