Omg loved this so much

Gah! EMOTIONS! I will admit, I am not a huge fan of Twilight, but this was really cute. Jelsa is simply my favourite ship, and this was beautifully written. The diction was nice and varied- proven for a refreshing, as well as interesting, read. I cannot wait to look at more of your stories. :)

So awesome, please do the full story, because if you don't I will!

Make more our I will die.

great

This was awesome please write more stories that was amazing

This is really inspiring!,like I read this a couple of months ago before I got an account and like I'v made my own version of this and its just really good, you can check it out if you want and that my story was based of yours and that's what gave me the idea if that's okay? like its not exactly the same but similar.

Gotta update soon!

This is amazing...i love it

Even though I hate twilight. This is pretty good.

Hi!I'm a reader from ...I want to turn this articl into I?There are many people in China like JELSA, ...OK,you see,my English is not very good..but I will try my best(A dictionary may help...)

This is better than the original

Wow. So mysterious! I like it good job!

This is... cliche. But that's a good thing! Actually it's so cliche that I can't take it seriously. I kind of feel like laughing! Which is the best reaction you can get out of me! The writing is great, I just can't see Jack thinking people are afraid of him. Keep writing! Sorry if you think this is offensive! I hate offending people! I don't see fun loving Jack Frost in the role of serious Edward Cullen.

I love this, I love this, I LOVE THIS! What I think someone should do is make a a jelsa twilight... thing...like a whole story! You should continue this! (fangirling) I LOVE THIS! 3