This... this is a masterpiece... so well written ! I have nothing but four words for youthank you very much !

OHHHHH MYYYYY GAWWWWDDDDDD! THAT WAS AMAZING! I HAVE CHILL BUMPS! That was so unsuspected, like I didn’t see it coming but it fits so well. And I loved that ending. Family above all and that’s what they are all about.

I would like the full story of chapter 18 and any other when I happen upon them lol. I cannot tell you how shocked I am at how amazing this story is! Or should I say book, because you took the supernatural cannon story and just ran with it. Made your own thing that is amazing with this OC. I LOVE IT TO DEATH!

damn. just damn. it's so good. I had no idea how you were gonna wrap it up, but it's brilliant.

I have to say, I'm a little sad about Luce, Im kinda sad he doesn't get to be a dad, ya know? but it's not like he didn't exactly have it coming. I appreciate that she acknowledges that while she will all chose family, that doesn't make it easy

This is not a simple story, its an epic. I felt like I was following Odysseus as I read of Bobby Winchester. No lie, one of the best things I've had the privilege of reading. Thank you for crafting the work of the gods.

hOLy fUCk.

Just.

I am - holy fuck.

This is The First SPN fanfic I ever read. Now, hundreds if not a thousand stories later, I return, and realize anew how utterly masterful this tale was. Mother of God, I can't express how incredibly this story enthralled me. I have a very good memory and I've read this story twice before, yet I was unable to leave this story to get a good night's sleep. It's 7:11 a.m.
It feels like poetry, like I'm living it, like I can breathe the dusty air of Earth crumbling or stare into the wild gleeful fires of Hell's chasms and listen to the eerie echo of my incredulous, wonderstruck laugh.
There are so many lines that I revisited with utter pleasure, from the beginning to the end. Again, MASTERFUL. You are an artist and a craftsperson.
The characters are so true to themselves and yet so new and re-defined, re-examined.
I'm pretty accustomed to reading, yet this wrung verbal and well-earned emotional reactions out of me.
This.
Deserves.
Awards.

FUCK YES. OMG. THIS WAS AMAZING!

Thank you so much for this. It was incredible. My favorite piece of literature ever. It had everything. I felt every emotion. This was insane.

Thank you.

I feel like you kind of borrowed some qualities from Daenerys, and gave them to Persephone.

Baby Gabriel is adorable! Gabriel is one of my favorite characters, and you made him better! Bless you!

This chapter gave me so much anxiety.

That's actually quite creepy. Annnnnd I'm not sleeping tonight... XD

Well, that's not awkward at all...

WOW. I am still stunned at that ending. Fabulously fitting.
I'm not going to lie; the first time I came upon this story I read up until the point where *spoiler* Bobby is revealed as Dean's daughter and I quit. It seemed like all the markings of a Mary-Sue, and when I finally came back around to finish reading this, there were many times where I questioned the kind of power Bobby attained (ex. literally creating hell, adopting one archangel, marrying another, killing one more). *spoilers over, in case anyone cares!*
The conclusion I came to, in the end, was that this story shouldn't be read as an addendum to the SPN world, but rather an exercise of world-building on its own. Because, DAMN, the parallels both overt and sly to Greek myths are astounding. This is NOT an OC created out of wish-fulfillment to do the nasty with Crowley, King of Hell (and sex). Bobby's story is her own, forged with sweat and blood from the beginning until the end. And frankly, as mentioned previously, I have never read a more fitting ending, considering the themes of this show, ever. During the Course of Ruling Hell is a work of art. I'm glad that I got over my prejudice. I'm grateful that you wrote this. (And thank God you brought *that* character back in the last chapter because I LOVE HIM!)

I. Am. Crying. My heart is so broken.

OMG. Is the porn activity book still available?LOL! Thos is so damned good. Excellent writing throughout!