Reviews for Date With Density
JustAnotherTypicalBastard chapter 7 . 1/24/2016
All your stories are great but this is probably my favorite
RavenSerendipity chapter 7 . 4/4/2015
Excellent. Although I am still wondering wether there may have been some alcohol in those drinks by mistake after all. :)
RavenSerendipity chapter 2 . 4/4/2015
I found them yelling their priorities hilarious. Especially star, "fun, fun, fun... Mission?"

Also star yelling at them to bite her cracked me up, I tried to hold back a laugh seeing as it is 1 in the morning and I ended up making a weird sputtering noise (I should have just laughed bc the noise I made startled my brother who was walking past my door to drink water). I saw star saying that to maybe beast boy but not in that situation and not to raven.
RavenSerendipity chapter 1 . 4/4/2015
Lol beast boy... "That's what all my dates say!"
Oh and then starfire thinking about raven saying "bite me!" To him. Hilarious.
kia427love chapter 7 . 3/22/2015
this story was very well thought out and kept me on the edge of my seat up till the end. thank you for the great story!
HunterMoore chapter 7 . 3/9/2015
Great story, really awesome stuff. Loved this last chapter.
Overwatch147 chapter 7 . 2/9/2015
I loved it! Amazing work! I loves BB and Raven, so cute! And was Mr. Benson a Regilar Show reference? Because it sure felt like it! Anyway, I loved this story and it's definitely going on my favourites list!
TheForceIsStrongWithThisOne chapter 7 . 11/2/2014
Phew! I was worried that some back seat "gymnastics" might be next. But BB is a gentleman and Raven is a lady.

Ah, but for how long can they keep their secret? Robin is a detective, after all.
TheForceIsStrongWithThisOne chapter 6 . 11/2/2014
Ha! I knew it! Mumbo broke the magic! But it appears that Raven has an idea.

Also, a nit: A round house is a kick (I'm a black belt, so I know these things). I think that perhaps you meant that Raven punched him with a "haymaker", which is a swinging punch and are not very effective as they lack force and are easy to block.

Off to the final chapter!
TheForceIsStrongWithThisOne chapter 5 . 11/2/2014
Ok, what was in Raven's drink?
TheForceIsStrongWithThisOne chapter 4 . 11/2/2014
He did it, and it won't "buff out" either!
TheForceIsStrongWithThisOne chapter 3 . 11/2/2014
The ride in the car has been eventful, but I guess they couldn't travel on the Tidwell Scooter
TheForceIsStrongWithThisOne chapter 2 . 11/2/2014
Naughty BB! Copping a feel!
TheForceIsStrongWithThisOne chapter 1 . 11/2/2014
I was thinking that to make the fake date even more convincing that BB could wear holorings to disguise himself.

But now Raven, contrary to her earlier statement, is nervous. Something tells me that BB is going to be very gallant and will surprise her, and of course, Mumbo will spoil the moment.

Onto the next chapter!
Wicked Navajo chapter 7 . 10/26/2014
I like your writing style. Would a sequel be too optimistic for us to think about? The thought of them being sent "undercover to a movie" is already really interesting, and I would enjoy seeing how a story like that would play out :)
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