This story has a lot of potential and I really like your style of writing. Please write/post more soon!:)

Damn, this story is good. I love it. And I love the use of the naginata as a weapon, for some reason, so that's cool, too. Can't wait to see more of this!

please continue this fanficction. it sounds great and i want to see iroh's reaction to her controlover her fire. i know you havent written this story in a while but i do hope yo will continue.

This story gives me life and I'm dying because you aren't updating. I liked it all very much, and I'm hoping that this gets updated soon. Good job, hun c:

This seems very, very interesting! I cannot wait till she meets Zuko, and Zuko's reaction to her firebending! Just waiting for the next chapter! Hope you update soon... :D

Ohh this seems really good!

That's was amazing chapter. Looks forward to next chapter.