Reviews for Vetitum Amoris
Ayla chapter 8 . 6/22/2016
It's been a long time and I can understand that it will be hard toe getoond back into it. But perhaps this offers a fresh look upon the story, so you can continue it more easily than 1,5 year ago? In any case, I hope you will finish the story.
Guest chapter 8 . 12/18/2015
Please update soon.
ina12248 chapter 8 . 11/21/2015
Make more chapters please
ina12248 chapter 1 . 10/27/2015
Can you make more chapters to the story
lovingyouisbest chapter 8 . 10/19/2014
I love this story! Lucy is a brillian character, and I think I kind of have a crush on Felton, please update soon
Guest chapter 8 . 10/16/2014
I have to admit to being disappointed. I don't know what I expected, but I'd hoped for a more optimistic conclusion to Felton's story-either that the rumors about he woman and child were totally false (as in on woman at all) or even a less savory story that he did have a child-something to make him truly less desirable to Lucy even if her feelings didn't just end. Lucy seemed too shocked at the initial story to then suggest an affair. An affair with all the possibility of pregnancy was hardly without risk.
Rachetg chapter 8 . 10/16/2014
Finally we learned about Felton's past. I feel bad that he trusted his uncle and his uncle told his dad. :(
I LOVE Felton's character! Can't wait to read more! :)
Guest chapter 8 . 10/16/2014
Really interesting to find out his back story. Surely his uncle manipulated his father into changing his will when he was dying so would that will hold up in a law court?
Rachetg chapter 7 . 10/10/2014
Poor Lucy :( can't wait to see what happens!
Rachetg chapter 6 . 10/10/2014
I love Felton already! :) even though he broke her heart, he was trying to do the right thing for Lucy!
Megzy chapter 6 . 10/8/2014
Aww that was brilliant! I loved you romantic angst!
Ayla chapter 6 . 10/6/2014
Yay! This has met all my expectations :) Thanks a lot, I know it must've been hard to continue after getting stuck. I really appreciate the effort and have enjoyed the chapter immensely. I hope you'll have an easier time writing the rest of the story. I'm looking forward to reading it.
Guest chapter 6 . 10/5/2014
Wow, Felton is such an honourable man. Can't wait to find out his background story
Ayla chapter 5 . 10/5/2014
This story was updated today acoording to it's status, but there seems to be no new chapter. And that while I've been looking forward to the next part so much :(
Please try and write some more. I realize that a creative process can't be forced, but your story so far is great; I'm certain you will be able to come up with something good.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/4/2014
Interesting story. I do hope you post again soon. I am as intrigued by Felton as Lucy is! I do have to say Jane is quite OOC (maybe that's what you intended?) when she calls the groom horrible as is Elizabeth, well not so much, but I can't see her thinking Lydia was so much manipulated as willfully scandalized...:)
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