Heee. :D

Good god you've made me ship it! Great story! I like the other side of Eska we saw here. Thank you!

Nice.

Hi,

I must admit that I really enjoy reading such a different fanfiction!
It was neither exaggerated nor too lovey-dovey how you did write this One-Shot but rather realistic, with a hint of amusement hidden beneath.
What a great idea to describe Eska's kisses like "being hit by an earth disk". Yet, it fits her demanding character very well. So in addition to that I appreciate your thought of the "secret side" of Eska which she only shows to selected ones, like Bolin.
It is also very interesting that you put this kiss shortly after their first actual meeting with each other. But hey, I was always wondering what arouses Bolin's interest in Eska and your version is a very clever and comprehensible solution! Save the fact, that it fills the "gap" between their first meeting and their first date very properly.
In addition to that, you did a nice job in describing the characters in detail, for example, Eska's habit for rather intimidate than inviting people and Bolin's "big mouth" that gets easily shut in flirting situations.
However, the last paragraph really got me and convinced me to put this OC into my favourites! Very well :)
I hope to read more of your work concerning this fandom and especially this couple!

Have a nice day :)
Yours,
Elvira

I really loved this, heart warming and beautifully romantic.

-Ed